Creati\/e feedback

Hey ABC'ers, I\/e just finished making a photo \/ideo to go with a song i written. Can i get some \/iews and shares please, help spread the message of creation.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=16Pbq02cxEE&hd=1

Its an original song, words by me and music by kieran Mc Carthy, Please let me grow by watching and sharing.
Xx

skinner_jennifer | April 23, 2012 - 13:44

Hi There Will,

just listened to your musical track, I really
thought it was good, it reminded me of a band
from the 1970s called the Strawbs.

By the way I loved your voice, very mellow.

Jenny.

WillSimpson | April 23, 2012 - 16:18

Thanks, I listen to the strawbs, the ones with sandy denny?

Tanks for listening, x

lavadis | April 23, 2012 - 18:51

Interesting and thought provoking - have a look at my "love in a time of riots" on the same theme and see what you think. I thought the photo montage was very well thought through and put together.

Parson Thru | April 23, 2012 - 20:28

I agree with lavadis about the photo montage and like the song, too. Together they form a great piece of concept art (and I like the message). The lyric and vocal are great: kind of haunting and appealing. The vocal carries the message well. I like the refrain and just wonder if it needs a bridge of some sort just to take it to another level - just a kind of juxtaposition. That might just be my own taste bleeding into an objective view but hey, all our stuff is subjective. Like it a lot though. Well done Will and Kieran.

WillSimpson | April 26, 2012 - 12:07

Appreciate that, thankks