I really enjoyed this submission and alpha asked for advice on structure. If anyone can help I think that it would be appreciated. I'm so sorry that I don't know how to post the direct link. It is a super poem anyway, so if you get there you'll benefit regardless!
scratch | April 28, 2012 - 22:02
If somebody can post the link I would be obliged.
Verdana | April 29, 2012 - 00:11
Think this is the piece you're referring to scratch.
http://abctales.com/story/alphadog1/carpe-viem-carpe-diem-second-positio...
scratch | April 29, 2012 - 10:00
Thank you Verdana.
alphadog1 | April 30, 2012 - 14:38
humble thanks to a worthy group of people :)
alphadog1 | June 12, 2012 - 14:36
agrhhh, my page has shrunk and I was going to get soem work done today... heeelpp and if this doesn't make sense its because I can't see the bloody words without a microscope.
Verdana | June 13, 2012 - 16:32
Now you know I'd love to help AD1, but I'm kinda tied up shovelling out a whole heap of stuff I just haven't done and I can't even bare to think about all the stuff I need to do and still didn't and basically ... I need to go now too.
alphadog1 | June 13, 2012 - 17:58
its ok I sorted it.