Topic posted in response to The Farm : my http://www.abctales.com/story/alexislebaroudeur/farm
Hello
I would like to know if this is structured enough. Are the main character's actions clear? What can I do to improve upon clarity?
Thanks
RE: The Farm
Published by alexislebaroudeur on May 24, 2012 - 20:03
alexislebaroudeur | May 24, 2012 - 20:18
I have to precise that I'm 17 and that I don't really know how to proofwrite my work
How can I go through my text, what tools can I use to edit myself?
oldpesky | May 25, 2012 - 15:43
Hi alex, welcome to abctales. Try copying and pasting your work into here. It's not perfect but it's a great place to start. Best of luck.
http://prowritingaid.com/Free-Editing-Software.aspx