Hello, This is a story I wrote for a currently running contest. I tried to keep it G rated - or, a "U certificate". I'm not sure about the title or the ending, however. I would appreciate as much feedback and/or comments as possible in regards to it. If you feel that it sucks, or rocks, tell me, please.
I have not entered many contests...or any, now that I think of it (perhaps I think I entered them because I looked them over so many times, trying to muster up enough courage to even do it).
Anyway, please tell me what you think of it. Am I going in the right direction with it? Does it need more desrciption? Should I re-write it altogether?
Thanks in advance, and by the way, I've reached approximately 1,200 words with it (which is the maximum number of words allowed).