Hey new to writing, and thought id give it a go. Surprised by how much I enjoy it, and would love to take it further.
Writing this storey at the moment, one step at a time. The storey hasnt even been finalised in my mind, and I make some things as I go along. Some suggestions on how to continue would be fantastic.
Id suppose id describe this as a accesbile fantasy. I say this beacsue im trying to keep the world i have created 'realistic' and not wander off into 'surrealism' that I find a lot of fantasy does. If anyone is familiar with Magicians Guild, or Dune than you may notice some borrowed ideas. Also from video games inclusing Final Fantasy series and the Elder Scrolls.
Hope you like it
Stories in this set
Acrusia: EIGHT Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:38 | 149 reads
Acrusia: FIVE Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:32 | 153 reads
Acrusia: FOUR Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:30 | 129 reads
Acrusia: INTRODUCTION Submitted on January 12, 2007 - 15:19 | 396 reads
Acrusia: NINE Submitted on December 7, 2007 - 15:26 | 148 reads
Acrusia: ONE Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:22 | 137 reads
Acrusia: SEVEN Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:37 | 145 reads
Acrusia: SIX Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:35 | 153 reads
Acrusia: TEN Submitted on December 8, 2007 - 04:07 | 143 reads
Acrusia: THREE Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:27 | 154 reads
Acrusia: TWO Submitted on December 6, 2007 - 03:26 | 140 reads
Comments
_jacobea_ | December 7, 2007 - 13:58
It's a good start-I liked the descriptions in the first paragraph of the prologue. Keep it up-practise makes near perfect :)