Indecision

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from the ABC set The AeroQuill

Life is not optional.
Life is not quick.
Life can last lifetimes
Or go out on a wick.
Lust does not matter
Nor does your gold.
Dont make life a gamble
You'll soon have to fold.

Stop drinking happyness
And stop cheating, too.
Don't do it for everyone.
Do it for you.

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Comments

jolono | May 14, 2012 - 12:33

Welcome to the site, really enjoyed this poem. More please!

scratch | May 14, 2012 - 20:26

I also very much liked this one, well done.

Sooz006 | May 16, 2012 - 23:45

Ah Fresh meat. This is a cracking site, hope you enjoy.

Poetry isn't really my thing, so I'm not much qualified to do the deep and meaningfuls, but I know what I like and this has a sound, feel good quality to it. Great first entry, I particularly like the last two lines.

I can imagine myself chanting this like a mantra in the car on a tishy day. Look forward to reading more from you.