Hand in hand
across the sand,
water lapping at our feet,
arm in arm
under the stars,
with a full moon's glow.
Flowers and choclates cause I can,
days out and evenings in
curled up watching a film,
dancing and romancing,
doing household chores
while you put your feet up.
These are the things
I don't do enough,
and wish that i'd do more.
Because, and I know this sounds cliche,
but you're my princess
and I want to treat you that way
Comments
Prettyrose | July 25, 2011 - 01:49
Hi Andrew-evans :) I just want to say its really nice to see a straight forward but beautiful created poem.
I love it all but what caught my eye apart that all women and some men want to be pampered :) but the last two sentences 'under the stars,
with a full moon's glow'.
But enjoyed all of it. well done.
keep writing
keep smiling.
andrew-evans | July 25, 2011 - 10:10
Thank you very much. I like how this poem is formed.
Cavalcaderl | July 25, 2011 - 16:39
new andrew-evans
Reaslly enjoyed the flow of this,
sounds nice lucky girl.
Like the lines and stanzas of all.
Flows so well.
By the way paper states, something to-do
with Universities, like I was thinking why?
can't they have one near to students homes.
Two females started there own website is it
to do just that. Makes them like like home, and nearer, so never know do you?
all the best keep writing.
julie xx and a smile too.