Free-fall

This is very impressive Beeme 'chancing a glimpse of the afterlife' 'injured moon'. Really well done.

I love these lyrical abstractions of yours. :-)

Thanks very much Fatboy :] Appreciate the suggestion. Really happy you enjoyed this so much.

Beeme xx

Now I'm wondering what FB suggested.......

Anyway, Beeme, I love reading your work and this is no exception. Beautiful last stanza. xx

lol :] Thank you so much Seashore, for your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed :] xx

Beeme xx

I am growing into a big fan of your "lyrical abtractions" Beeme. I think Fatboy put it so well. A perfect poem. Much enjoyed the purity of every stanza. So well cut out
;)Pia

beeme I really like this one. In the final stanza, I wonder if you need that comma

Awwh thank you so very much Pia! :] I'm so glad you enjoyed this one so much! xx

Thank you Insert, really happy you like this one. I've removed the comma in the last stanza xx

Thank you for the cherry Abctales xx

This is just beautiful, Beeme. Well done indeed on the cherry;-)

Tina xx

Thank you very much Tina :-]

Beeme xx

Stunning, Beeme. I'm loving all your colourful poetry since I've got back online - some gorgeous imagery in this, well done on the cherry and looking forward to more :)

Rachel xx

Thank you so much Rachel! I hope I can deliver some more colourful poetry that you may like too xx

I'm pretty certain you can, Beeme - can't wait! ;0)xx

:o) teehee I hope so!! xx

'light shines blue
the injured moon
drowns herself
in glistening air

my body
rises towards
honey-dew light
my scars spread wings
free-fall off the cliff.'

I absolutely LOVE the imagery and especially in these last two stanzas. Absolutely gorgeous use of language. One of your best on my list ;-)

Nathan x

Thanks so much Nathan :) Really happy you liked this so much!

Beeme xx