Memory

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Your spirit
falls away
from your body;
like wallpaper
from whitewashed walls.
Dishevelled angel wings,
turned up at the edges
like an old sepia photograph
a memory of something lost.

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Comments

fatboy74 | March 20, 2011 - 21:19

small but very beautiful Beeme. :-)

Beeme | March 20, 2011 - 21:39

Thank you very much Fatboy! :-)

Beeme xx

MistakenMagic | March 21, 2011 - 00:36

I love the way the poem slowly expands, Beeme. This has a beautiful old world feel to it. Well done!

Magic xxx

Beeme | March 21, 2011 - 12:30

Thanks very much Magic, glad you liked this :)

Beeme xx