A new day

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My ice- blue body
perfect before
the scarlet
sun thaws me

my bedroom readjusts
in the flurry of
snow-flake light,
flickering black
-brown outlines

a slipstream of
glistening golden light
admires my mirror
dances in its reflection

casting my washed-out
body onto a pastel skyline
each plume-blue-
love-scar dissolving with
the rising sun

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Comments

ScoZen | January 22, 2011 - 17:29

ScoZen

Ahh, Bemme
Another one of yours that I enjoy.
Only don't thaw out to soon.
Regards.

fatboy74 | January 22, 2011 - 22:34

Yes Beeme I agree with scozen, I also enjoyed this and am enjoying very much this style of poem (without sounding too much like an arse, I think they call it stream-of-consciousness). The 'plume blue love scar dissolving with the rising sun' is another brilliant ending to a very good poem of yours. :-)

insertponceyfre... | January 22, 2011 - 23:56

me too Beeme. I'm really enjoying your colour themed poetry - wonderful imagery

Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 10:53

:-) awwh thank you ScoZen, I'll try not too :)

Beeme xx

Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 11:25

Thank you so very much Fatboy, you do not sound like an arse at all lol :) Yes, I think this would be a stream of consciousness poem I just looked it up ;) I enjoy writing these types of poems so I'm very glad that you get enjoyment from them too.

Beeme xx

Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 11:25

Thank you so much Insert! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

Beeme xx

Silver Spun Sand | January 23, 2011 - 22:52

It's all been said, Beeme, except well done from me. Wonderful;-)

Tina xx

Beeme | January 23, 2011 - 22:55

Thankyou, so very much Tina! :)

Beeme xx

seashore | January 24, 2011 - 10:44

Yes you go from strength to strength - you have a lovely `easy' style if you know what I mean, Beeme. It reads like that anyway.

Beeme | January 24, 2011 - 13:10

Thank you very much seashore :) I'm glad it reads that way ;-] This one was quite tricky to get right.

Beeme xx

SundaysChild | January 24, 2011 - 20:39

Gorgeous xx

Beeme | January 24, 2011 - 23:06

Thank you very much Sunday! :)

Beeme xx

Kahdai | January 26, 2011 - 22:48

I am glad if your scars finally dissolving, I did like the poems with them though xx K

Beeme | January 26, 2011 - 22:49

awwh hehe, thank you very much Kahdai. Glad you enjoyed them xx

Beeme | February 15, 2011 - 09:41

Thank you for the cherry Abctales x