Silence

A great little read Beeme.

Jenny.

I like this one Beeme. One thing though- should there be some kind of punctuation between 'hear' and 'leave'? Otherwise it just 'runs' a bit fast and I have to think about what I'm reading if you know what I mean? xx

Thank you very much Jenny and SundaysChild, yeah I see that you mean, I'll sort that out :)

Beeme xx

I really like this beeme - it's short but very powerful

Thank you very much Insert!Thank you for the cherry abctales :)

Beeme xx

A lot of emotion in those lines! Enjoyed.

Thank you L G Meadows, glad you found this emotive :)

Beeme xx

new Beeme
Well deserved cherry!
Good poem,short sad on love.
Well expressed, and compact.
Hope all is well. See another
poem of Pinda's on here too.
julie xx

Thank you Julie, glad you enjoyed. Yeah so did I, it's so terribly sad. I really miss his encouragment and passion for writing as I'm sure you do. Good to hear from you :)

Beeme xx

A powerful little piece, Beeme! Well done on the cherry :)

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Magic :)

beeme xx

posted twice :~)

You've said so much in so few words, Beeme - this is beautifully brilliant :)

Congrats on the cherries and hope you are well,

Rachel xx

Thank you so much Rachel, I am ok thanks :) Really glad you enjoyed this onw so much:)

Beeme xx

Beeme I am sure many of us can identify with looking in the mirror in the morning. Myself it's got to the stage I don't look at all. Just ignore him.

It's a good poem &&

My favorite poems are short ones that give just a burst of feeling (even though I've written long ones too). I really liked this one.