So I scream
in silent bursts
you must never hear,
me of the beauty
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skinner_jennifer | July 12, 2011 - 12:22
A great little read Beeme.
SundaysChild | July 12, 2011 - 14:17
I like this one Beeme. One thing though- should there be some kind of punctuation between 'hear' and 'leave'? Otherwise it just 'runs' a bit fast and I have to think about what I'm reading if you know what I mean? xx
Beeme | July 12, 2011 - 15:07
Thank you very much Jenny and SundaysChild, yeah I see that you mean, I'll sort that out :)
insertponceyfre... | July 12, 2011 - 21:17
I really like this beeme - it's short but very powerful
Beeme | July 12, 2011 - 22:51
Thank you very much Insert!Thank you for the cherry abctales :)
L G Meadows | July 13, 2011 - 07:54
A lot of emotion in those lines! Enjoyed.
Beeme | July 13, 2011 - 10:10
Thank you L G Meadows, glad you found this emotive :)
Cavalcaderl | July 14, 2011 - 16:21
Well deserved cherry!
Good poem,short sad on love.
Well expressed, and compact.
Hope all is well. See another
poem of Pinda's on here too.
Beeme | July 14, 2011 - 16:55
Thank you Julie, glad you enjoyed. Yeah so did I, it's so terribly sad. I really miss his encouragment and passion for writing as I'm sure you do. Good to hear from you :)
MistakenMagic | July 14, 2011 - 17:46
A powerful little piece, Beeme! Well done on the cherry :)
Beeme | July 14, 2011 - 18:55
Thank you very much Magic :)
posted twice :~)
RachelPatricia | July 15, 2011 - 09:58
You've said so much in so few words, Beeme - this is beautifully brilliant :)
Congrats on the cherries and hope you are well,
awsamy | July 15, 2011 - 12:03
Thank you so much Rachel, I am ok thanks :) Really glad you enjoyed this onw so much:)
Nolan | July 15, 2011 - 23:26
Beeme I am sure many of us can identify with looking in the mirror in the morning. Myself it's got to the stage I don't look at all. Just ignore him.
It's a good poem &&
cormacru999 | July 16, 2011 - 20:50
My favorite poems are short ones that give just a burst of feeling (even though I've written long ones too). I really liked this one.
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