Sunlit poems

What a pleasure to read these short poems together - they compliment each other so well and you finish on such a brilliant image:

or a marital ring,
curled in denial.

Fab. ATB Fatboy :-)

Thank you so much Fatboy! Glad they worked like this. Really happy you liked the newer additions :) Your encouragement means a lot.

Thank you for the cherry eds!

Beeme xx

Beeme - I must admit I could see a link with many of your recent poems. This is wonderful. They compliment each other beatifully, and are testament to your ever growing writing skills. More than well done;-)

Tina

Hi Beeme,

this is so beautifully put together, I particularly
liked the lines:-

There is light
which never fades;
an Angel-
glowing in the back of your neck.

Beautiful lines.

Thanks for the read.

Jenny.

wow, thank you so much Tina! Glad you enjoyed the poems in a collection. Much appreciated :)

Beeme xx

Thanks very much Jenny, really happy you enjoyed :)

Beeme xx

I agree with fatboy - love those last lines! The imagery is delicious throughout, well done on the cherry - richly deserved :)

Magic xxx

Thank you very much Magic!

Beeme xxx

You do it very well with the light and the shadow Beeme
another beautiful poem from your hand- there is a lot of gentility. if you can say that- well what I mean is that most of your poems come off as very gentle behind all the darkness and shadow.
;)Pia

Awwwh thank you so much Pia! thats so sweet of you to say, really happy you enjoyed :)

Beeme xx

Beeme, these are just stunning.

All are simply gorgeous, but II and IV are my faves -definitely agree with Pia about the gentility you weave into your poetry, they're like little individual wisps of beauty and such a joy to read :)

Well done on the cherries, I really love these,

Rachel xx

Just popping in - quick visit but had to stop to leave you a comment.

This is your `thing' Beeme - really well done!

Each of these stands so well alone but together, these have a lot more power.

wow, thank you so much Rachel for your lovely comment, I'm so happyy you enjoyed these so much :)

Beeme xx

awwh thank you so much Seashore!

Beeme xx

Thank you Dynamaso glad these worked well together :)

Beeme xx

liked 111 the best :) - delicate, reckon you can lose the 1st semi-c there after leaves -thought it works lovely with just the line break to do it. Lovely theme, like your images, and together there's story -didnt get plural bodies there at end -will read again now -enjoyed!

Thank you very much Littleditty :D

Beeme xx

Beeme, a very lovely poem, snappy, full of imagery, and a kaleidoscope of colours. Richard LP

This is a great poem. I am sure plenty would want to read it, but as to selling there's the rub ! As far as I know even the best poetry doesn't sell much.