As moon shadows
slice across the room
pushing aside
her lonely gloom;
she stands to watch
them slide away
as the earth rotates to one more day.
The sun arrives
to herald the dawn
casting more shadows
across the lawn.
Growing shorter
towards the noon
Like her, the shadows await the moon.
The sun’s harsh glare
reflects her age
like cruel mirrors
she banned from the stage.
At night time she comes
into her own
dancing with moon shadows all alone.
And for a space
she is young again
her nightly dreams
a fantasy in vain;
the sun will rise,
shatter the illusion
fool she is, beguiled by delusion.
Comments
Nathan Bednarek | May 7, 2009 - 14:40
'as the earth rotates to one more day.'
I love this line. Simple, but effective and the whole poem is a lovely read. Great work as always, well done.
Nathan.
Bradene | May 14, 2009 - 13:53
Hi Nathan, sorry I'm late answering. I'm behind on most things these days, but I do appreciate your sweet comments Val x