One Afternoon

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from the ABC set Life's Ups And Downs

The house is quiet
except for the turned down
drone of the television.
His snores have quietened
he sits in his chair
open mouthed, dribble on his chin;
eyes closed, lashes rest on waxen skin.

I look to see the rise and fall
of his chest,
I discern no movement.
My heart pounds
pain rips through me…
His eyes pop open and I jump back.
He smiles at me
“You look tired” he says “ why don’t you rest?”

I take a tissue and wipe away the dribble
“ I’ll make you a cup of tea first” I answer.

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tamara (not verified) | October 8, 2008 - 14:56

Loved this,It is very deep.well done,Lynne.x

Bradene | October 9, 2008 - 14:00

Thanks Lynne glad you enjoyed. Val x