Mybrainoverflowswithwords
in no particular order.
Theyspillfrommymind
hit the floor with a thump.
Myheadspinsoutofcontrol
and I fall with the words.
Mythoughtsburnuplifemiles
yet I stand stock still
Whiletheworldwhirlsaroundme.
I want to capture the words
buttheyflashpasttoofasttocatch
then I forget which of them I want to save.
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Comments
tcook | October 9, 2008 - 13:32
You need another 'o' in the second last line!
Bradene | October 9, 2008 - 14:06
Thanks I hadn't noticed that before. I'm so glad you spotted it. At least I know someone read it thoroughly at least (-; Thanks again. Val