Ray gave me a chunk of cake
with little monkeys on
they looked so yummy
it really wasn't funny
Pop! one in the mouth
umm feel them melt
I swallowed my tea
eaten a milky way
I felt ill
gripping pains began
dashed to the loo
good run for his money
After later read the box
of chocolate tray bake
no artificial colours
or hydrogenate fat
Many other chemical things
then chocolate and cream
Ray bought cheap
near to sell by date
The cheeky monkeys
monkey business
usually go for bananas
this was nearly my fate
comments and adjustments please!
Comments
hilary west | April 29, 2012 - 23:09
That was monkey business for sure! You have got to watch those sell-by dates. Everything has its price! Nice fun piece, Cavalcader.
insertponceyfre... | April 30, 2012 - 08:13
I really liked this one Julie - love the play on words
small typo: it's monkeys
Cavalcaderl | April 30, 2012 - 09:27
new hilary west
Thankyou comment made me laugh!
Box has cheap stickers on. Ray always
says ok past sell by date, bit like me?
ha! hah!
I am not one too look at ingredients,
on packets. Friend always did fats etc;
when helped him shop. i would get fed up,seeing
him picking up and choosing.
Ray hubby been shopping for me,
mad on chocolate cake! chococolate and small cakes
plus ice cream, got cholestrol heart watch can't tell him. This was 15 inch size box. Chunk least four by four,defintely good run for his money!
no not a vehicle.
That's what you get for being greedy!
Your so right in life! everything has it's price.
hope all ok with you. Many thanks.
julie xx
Cavalcaderl | April 30, 2012 - 16:17
new insertponceyfre
Whoops! pressed on your name
lost what commented back.
Thankyou good comment.
I did know Monkey or Monkies.
As mine in room Ray,called out spelling,
no way typed,I already checked dictionary,
Monkey no Monkies all got so confusing.
I missed out on school,never could get damn,
apostrophe's. Yes was meant to be funny,without
rude! Mine likes buy and go shopping for me,and
buy what he likes,loves choclate any kind cakes and ice cream! This tray bake cake 15 inches long,so
eaten Milky way,like my mechanical shop fall accident,told get! Like anyway,then mine has cut me chunk of Monkey cake off,little faces on each square,
but butter cream choclate,no! No to me,and orange and
chocolate. He says even bread past sell by date ok.
Cause this got stickers on reduced. Squares like four
by four,no not vehicle. What! is a typo. The last kind of poems,come up red line,Discuss this in the forum! Can't work that,missed bit of school. I grasp
things,ok if not, complicated leave.
Are you going Londond "The Wheatsheaf" I possibly wil
Ray bring me,and now black Panda eye's all cleared up! Like your stories. Yes, went be funny!
With wet weather,and papers gloom around in papers too. Thankyou good comments. Have share computer Ray,
and if neghbour's wonderful cat's in,will sit right in front on table his bottom, if in etc: so can't type,makes me laugh, so much! Like my last poem!
Owner always knows anything I do.
hope all is well for you.
Have altered thaks but still don't get it!
Ray said was Monkies.
julie xx
Nolan | May 7, 2012 - 11:05
Julie are you sure it's not Brooklax that you ate? Looks and tastes like chocolate.