FREEDOM

This is so beautiful Julie. Pinda would have been proud. I love it.

Beeme xxx

Julie, like Beeme said, this is absolutely beautiful.

I really love the lines:-

Maybe he is the golden sun
shining down on me
or the moon peeping
through the swaying trees

I'm sure Pinda would have found this a wonderful
piece of writing.

Thankyou for the read.

Jenny. xx

Julie - you have surpassed yourself, both in the content of this poem, and its writing. You have worked hard, and it has been more than worth it. 'Just perfect' is what I'd say;-)

Tina xx

I loved it too, Julie... beautifully expressed.

sue

new Beeme
Thankyou so much lovely comment.
Strange been bad day, I put t.v on,
And plane flying over, reminded me of Messerzsmitch"
spelt wrong,when little mum taking me up hill,to
hospital appointment,throat nose and ears etc; was, noise deafening she flung me on
the ground, landed side of a church wall. About 6 years old. Had a circle painted on tail. Months back exhibit museumn local, blow me someone said plane
cutting in next room found out Messerzsmitch photo
day;s of the gas masks, never landed in church yard, sid it hit the wall. So Thought put
in for Unbelievable (IP) changed mind, carried on for
dear Pinda entry fun comp. But you know he loved Fly me to the Moon, planets Jupiter and Mars let me play along with starts in his poems ect;
and part song, wanted bring the stars in, but he was a *star* In his words of poetry, wasn;t he. As entered it for comp; didn't know if alter when done!
But I truly know, you and other's can do better than this. Go on quick 5 minute effort, paid bang! it's on.
julie xx
Thankyou so much all that are commenting.On poem for Pinda tried first going be Unbelievable (IP) changed
my mind. So please read answer on here! Many thanks.
Beeme
Silver-Spun-Sand
Blighters rock
Skinner_jennifer
Sue Dinum

new Blighters rock
Thankyou so much, could been better,
teacher alway's wrote, won't listen. Ah!
Hello! I had a flaming bad day.
Put t.v on etc; and a plane flying?
Read Beeme's thankyou comment.As it was first
trying put bit answer each one.
Please read and listed to you all. By names.
So five minute thinking and scribble!
Bingo done comp; fun entry.
Explained on bottom of Beeme's.Comment. Why?
Please read. yep! Be nice think he is chuckling!
away,loved words in his poem
Pinda did on planets
Moon and stars and Jupiter etc; like the song.
"Fly me to the moon".
I Know you can all do better. Just 5 minute thing,changed from "Unbelievable" to fun comp; entry
for Pinda.
all the best
julie xx

new Skinner_jennifer
Jenny, what a beautful comment.
I answered Beeme first, and listed
all your wonderful names that have commented.
Said please read bottom of Beem's as have explained
more and how about the poem, and in bad mood. Turned t.v. on saw a plane flying etc; reminded me war time,
and gas mask, when mum took me up steep hill for children's hosp; appmt. Can read more from Beemes
comment. Re; being happy you mention, you would truly be amazed I try now,buckets tears, that's all can say! I get so furious with him etc; for not standing beside me in anything good bad etc. Then says "I love you". very hard tension work of the mind? Sensitive people go through so much, cos not tough enough! to fight that mentality in the wrongs of him. Must go.
Pinda loved stars moon and planets and in his poem.
Like song "Fly me to the moon".
Go on you can do better than this 5 minute wonder!
Alternated.
All the best
julie xx
Many thanks

Julie.
This is really lovely.
I hope all Pinda's friends get to read this.
Take care.

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Wow! thanks loovely comment. Tina,
I have explained in comment back
to Beeme as first, so please read:
And listed who answered so far thanks.
Was going be "Unbelievable" on changed mind.
Why! and how tried it 5 minutes flat.
From awful day, and put t.v on plane flying
as said all Beeme,and listed your names read
fullness of the story, do read please! and know
all can do better!than mine, was going ask help! But as comp; don't think can. Pinda loved planets and stars and moon etc in his poems.
Blowing bad gale out, took Jazz in 5 minute kip, now
wanted to go out, pleading eyes looking at me,up at the door. Waiting his master. Jumped up cried miaow!
kin of looked out window bit,and tried stop me typing,sat right in from of computer.Ugh!
Things not so grim, was her friend told me of daughter,who just called,with huge! Gt Dane mussled,
I jumped back, won't have in, don't think keep it,
and mine fixed up with her friend do garden alone thur all became difficult, not saying, all knew! He knew ankle freezes feeling shame. can;t get involved they must sort it out, don't think daughter can do or come. I will o out. Good news Sat laying in,bed just said few prayer's for all, and what! was it, a Money Spider ran fast over my fingers and arm, while
I was in bed. That could be maybe coming true. They say wind three times round you head, went too fast!
Are you blown about and your garden. Hope not part of hurricane Katie.
all the best julie xx
Thankyou. you are on top roller with your cherries! good. Ah! "You make me feel so young". song. he!
he!

new Sue dinum
Thankyou so much, was a five minute wonder.
After switching on t.v for sanity? bad day
messages all in correct three to me of them? with messages,and daughter,tired not walking so far, not getting involved! to muddling. On T.V saw the plane
the plane flying, think was 'Messerzsmitch'like the war part,re-minded me as child going up hill to children's hospital Mum took me,bang,! thrown on the ground bu Mum,aged about six. as it landed opposite, no in the wall, St.Nicolas Church,and gas masks memories. Anway have listed all
names on bottom of Beeme's comment.
And please read the true answer to poem explained.
Thanks so much. Blowing! a bloody gale out shops.
Get back,later, wanted stars, moon and planets in Pinda liked,so mention in a poem. Not quite right!
Please read comment and why on Beeme's from me explained, and listed on all.
Names kindly answered so far!
Daughter they deny makes me feel daft! and mine messes head up going tell daughter her x work friend does garden she is coming not telling her!
Daughter popped by, plus Gt Dane muzzled ugh!
didn't let in, stroked him. Got car as dropped mine to snooker and her hubby! I won't get involved, all say different things, until I ask find they nearly all know.In different versions to me, or not at all.
Say have told me?
all the best julie xx

Hi Julie, I thought I'd lost you, so glad you came back. Computers, technology and the internet are infuriating, aren't they? I just don't understand any of it. Glad to know you're okay and I'll get round to reading more of yours very soon, I promise. Off to Swanage today to see BLUES FESTIVAL (music).
Anyway, really loved this poem of yours and it is very well-written. Must go, speak soon.

lots of love

sue

new Sue dinum
Can't believe say that,makes
me feel big-head, a very bad three days.
Hi! Thanks great compliments.
Have good time Blues Festival,
sounds great. Get back later.
Been to see End Of 'The Rainbow.
Fab; apart swearing, great singing.
Tracie Bennett "Judy Garland" fab;
amazing star. Then went stage door
three signed for me, great.
Cloudy. love to all of you.
julie xx

new ScoZen
Wow! Hello. Many thanks.
It started off very bad day, so turned t.v on
and there was an aeroplane flying?
Going to try "Unbelievable" (IP)
suddenly scribbled 5 minutes sent the money,
and bingo! here it is for Pinda.
I am answering all beautiful comments
from all coming in. First Beeme and story with it.
And listing all by name on the bottom! of her comment
to me, stating facts of poem, and please read: etc;
He loved to mention planets, and stars and moon Jupiter and Venus in his poem, I did a bit. Hence make-up poem, 5 minute scribble.
Good luck! to all in the comp; entries
.
Like your poems and stories.
You take care too, keep writing! Computer or internet
cut out on and off two days. I wanted stars it it but
would have past the four line stanza.
Bless you, as Pinda would say!
I am sure you can do one better and just as good.
julie xx

Bless you Julie- this is very nice and I am sure it would have pleased Pinda.

Good luck in the competition

;)Pia

new Highhat
Pia new one I mean home here now.
Thanks your lovely comment.
It been rough time, so turned
into poem for Pinda.Adding to it
as I went. Just how happened t.v plane.
So many thanks good luck!
bless you to I wanted bring in the
Tattoos on his arms. Couldn't do.
And planets he loved.
Tried another one, long and muddled
like me, bit interesting.
julie xx been bad time over week.
Finished new one now,bit long,
not thinking much moment.
Things improving different ways.
Good luck on your's that was hard to write,
I bet.But full of real facts.
I think of Napolean and wars.
julie x

new Editor t.cook (Tony)
Well Tony just going to send you an email.
As I see email to-day states 3 'FREEDOM'
Cherry! ah! picked.
I queried with FTSE100 first,if I was seeing things,
as says 3 for 'FREEDOM'. and the googlemail I am on,
has all been re-set can't work till learn again.
Computer plays up, on Track sluggish like me.
Now FTSE100 Paul,has said that (Tony) has sent them.
So with hard time having with Ray,out.
Won't take me shops,or out coffee, so busy join singing here and there.
Many many thanks Tony for thinking I deserve a treble,of cherries! and to Editor Team.
I was feeling low!
And for all the AbcTaler's who all gave such great
comments for 'FREEDOM' on late dear
'Pinda'. R.I.P
Wishing you all a very merry christmas.
cavalcaderl julie hugs,don't get or kisses xxx (:-
I bet your doing a little chuckle Tony?
One I might understand but 3 Wow! OMG.