MY LITTLE WHITE DOVE True

This is a nice poem Cavalcaderl. I really enjoyed it. Good luck with your writing in the future...

Jacques.

Hi Julie,
this is such a sweet story, it really made me go
'ah.' It's such a shame when we loose something
special and close to our hearts. I know, because the
amount of things close to my heart I have lost, when
moving house.
Good work.
Jenny.

Hi Julie,
You asked what I had lost, well vinyl music records,
that hold dear memories for me. Also I have lost a
lot of precious jewellery, that I had from when I
was a teenager. Also photo's that were dear to my
heart. I had a beautiful dolls house, that was
especially made for me, even the furniture was made
for the dolls house. I never did find out what
happened to it.
Oh well I suppose it's just one of those things.
Anyway Julie, you have a good weekend aswell.
Jenny. xx

New skinner_jennifer
Sorry,you lost so much,
pressed wrong button,lost it.
So trying again answer.I used have Pink Vinyl
records of Elvis Presley,gave to church homeless
for fete's.and all buy at market cheap things.
Poor you,loosing so much,wasn't anything marked.
I know someone had furniture van,long journey table
all bashed. Didn;t you have any list or photos of things.Mum d 2004 big family,they took over as different carer's.all thrown out,or bits,shared.
I was carer and at N/Home week before d.
All younger than me.Greed,let them get on with it.
Told me what to do? why bother.
Just come in we have.quite warm out.Yes,memories,
I remember doll's house,had as child,pop made all
furniture and put lights in.Those were the days.
julie xx

Julie! Have you ever heard a song on the radio you thought was just junk- an idiot a’ ranting and a’ raving the most stupid of lyrics- then heard it was one of your favourite artists and instantly you knew what a great song it was? Or someone sent you this stupid little present you just chucked into your wardrobe without even looking twice. Then suddenly realised it must be from that incredibly special person and how delightful, how infinitely precious!!

Wonder how many we've thrown away hey?

Thing is it's far more important who it's from! ~&

New Jacques07
Thankyou for great compliments.
I have just done one called "I TRY"
most true,to life,or experiences good
or bad.Some I can put some I can't.I have only started a year now.
on here! At first I was impossible to
learn all.As used to go late in life,
Day centre,and writing groups aged from
16-80 taught by cards,images,20 words
then put into poem or story.Lots of other
things of groups use old new talents.
Here! I am on AbcTales.I share computer hubby,
not mine.Reader's on here,all love "The Song Of Songs" well into over thousand now,from Bible and
wedding,away where we went to year ago.Romance words
beautiful.Not my work.
Have a good week-end.Just read your Tea Leaf,so true.
I was told once,pills,never know? what the concoctions are made of.
even snakes venom.Well.Powerful to.Especially pills,when blue.
julie xx

I like your poem. But then, I'm always at a loss to explain a loss!
:-)

New Nolan
Thankyou lovley reply,yes,I hate
gory Rap,Or anyone who changes as a star
into another character,or in a film etc;
Rap we actually tried few of us,at day centre
all ages volunteer,16-8o.All had to say sing quick
line made up.But what fun,what a laugh all together
great huge earphones on slipped.Your reading my mind? I had a dress green I hate,sorry colour?
It was grannies unlucky colour.
came by post,no name,think brother -marked Scotland.Then two years a parcel to both of us
were? left at xmas in front garden,never knew who
from to both of us in name.Or anonymous cards couple years.Get in touch.£5 blown up the pathway. But then I gardually got mix in so many,mainly church and groups.Who knows how we are blessed.
Iv'e received email 2nd one now.Don't know who?Name
1st I cancelled called Nails In The Fence. Poem
re; forgiveness in? and names forewarded from before?
Now a 2nd one called The Ugly Frog, very good.
Dancing Frogs,and Prince in the story,like a letter
foreward on to other's, I don't know who,well named
and list of other's peculiar,word is um circular.
Thankyou explaining.I am more of an Agony Aunt on here! maynot understand but help other's maybe.
Have a nice week-end,any news yet?Miaow.
julie xx

New Canary Islander
Thankyou lovely comment
Can you explain a little bit
more please,for me.
I to enjoy your's and all I read
exciting.
julie x

In its simplicity and clarity of language, your poem is pure it’s very sincere.
Wonder how many we've thrown away? ~&

New Nolan
yes,true.Thankyou lovely comment.
I have already left comment well reply,
above quite,long one.
Thankyou so much.Must read some your's.
And the Title's are amazing,may I say.
julie x

sorry I'm so late commenting Julie. This is a lovely poem. I really enjoyed. Well done, I believe you're growing as a poet and its very nice to see. :)

Beeme xx

NEW Skinner_jennifer
Hello! Jenny
Yes,true we both laughed to try and save it,
have to wait till flu,gas maintenance man comes and cleans fire?
I had one of my brother's then in full "Buffalo" regalia that's,wear headress I am being corrected
by hubby ugh!
but we both managed to hook it back.This is a little
crack so small.Bewteen mantlepiece and wall.
what have you lost close to your heart,can you write
about it? I bought 2nd hand brooch,of Pearly King and
Queen in small car costume jewellery,very small,I gave it too my mum when she was alive,but she would
stick it in heavy clothes,broke pin,I thought took it
in have it mended 2nd hand shop,no! no where.I still
keep hunting for it.It was very cheap.
I see you are not new Abc, I am thinking you are.
I can't keep up new ones so good too.
have a good week-end. Mine are mostly true on here!
julie xx

New Beeme
WellI don't call myself a poet,
just if someone likes what I try
to do main thing, is to achieve
it better as I go along. Some days
are better some not so good.
What do they say practice makes
perfect, considering I couldn't
do a thing, it is just amazing.
In everything nearly I can do.
julie
thnk's to you, and all.