Twilight Time

Excellent poem. Visually stunning and descriptive, my praise to you writing friend!

You paint a colourful picture of twilight time with your words, Julie. I really like your description of the droplets being like 'tear drops falling to the ground'.

Tina xx

Very good, Julie. When I saw the title I thought it was going to be about teenage vampires. Thank goodness it's not. Hope you and Ray are well.

new Chinobus
Hello! Thankyou so much,for
lovely descriptive comment.
Must read your's,are you new!
If you are, a very warm welcome.
It was a shopping trip!
cavalcaderl julie

new Oldpesky
Good afternoon,all these
compliments, gone to my head!
No wonder had a headache other day.
Glad you liked it,no not Vampires please!
This is true! out shopping, saw the 'Young
eccentric gentleman' 'Starbucks' all happened.
So quick. Photos took Ray's camera. May go in
local paper,know it's not good.
But could be a booster for AbcTales.com t.cook
Says.
Like poem states,the onto decorations,hence
photos,make up poem quick! Ray attaches all.
But forgot 'Twilight' ones.Have aim high,
while,people walking about.
Well definitely not as good as Runner up!
more practice need and think slower,before
submitting. Ray is out,so quiet no tv on.
We are ok now. Thanks.
Have you got snow mention can't see out window.
Rays in now. Off to 'Motown' show soon.
Love songs sing along to there.
julie x

Really enjoyed this, Julie. You seem to get better and better - much the same as a good wine I suspect.

sue

Beautiful Julie, as you mentioned with the song this poem goes straight to the heart.

new Maggyvaneijk
Wow! thanks great comment.
After someone writes so well.
On way back, 'The Wheatsheaf'
Good evening,we ran through very
light tunnel of underground,elderly
man playing a Harp,then dawned on me,
it was 'My Heart Will Go And On'
'Celine Dion. So I sung bit passing by,turned
Looked please! So dropped £1 in his hat.
Not said how your birthday went.
Hope went well. That's very last cheery!
necklace shop is getting, that's fourth.
But got cherrries on end belts now.
Well I received two emails,on new AbcTaler's
and comment,so nice.
Hope your well.
I played 'The Platter's' on cd.
Last night. "Twilght Time" on there too.
Going saturday show MoTown quite few died.
Be great mine won't come but collect me. Ugh!
Well great compliment,London night. From Editor
t.cook (Tony) so much gone wrong! Great booster
now got to keep it going,do better. Mistakes come
when flustered,and keeps coming in talking! Computer's in the same damn room. We have to share not mine.
julie x

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Wow! Tina,many thanks.
One off thing, true! out shopping.
Saw all,but guess! what! 'Argus' car
sitting outside,probably gone to day centre,up top road,don't know if put in paper,or cut down.
The other poem 'Starbucks' is true! too, going get Ray attach photo he forgot, of twilight lights I took,only sent Ray did, with 'The eccentric gentleman' poem only.
Two girl's at his table,one borrowed Ray's camera.
I had taken with me, and photo of opera singer,so young him too. No Ray! with me, difficult aim high,with bags on arms. Misty photos of 'Twilights'.
But two went,of paper, 'Young gentleman' instead. Got him to smile came out well. A part from shopper's in way,so put bags,down and took photos.
In between shopper's crossing past.
Like AbcTaler's tell me smile it works! Out.
If does go in,paper booster AbcTales.com....etc Editor t.cook states. Not that good, don't know yet!
Till Argus comes out everyday we buy.
Many thanks to me,on 'Freedom' comment before
comp; for dear late,PINDA.
have altered poem a bit, added to, missed it out. What do you think! because changed the teaser!
Hope your well. Ah! your the good writer and painter.
Just bought cd Sue Boyle one song Someone to watch
over me,going play. Course song 'Twilight Time'
lovely words,deep in your heart, your kisses thrill
me,at twilight time. Do you know it.
Hope your well. Colder evenings.
Doesn't look "Argus put the photo or poem in'
yet! Missed out the Cravat.dove colour waistcoat,and white gloves. Ry forgot to attach the 'Twilight' decorations poem and photos of them! Maybe my emails,
not working! They don't always put people's poems in. Course not. Done couple mine if room. And pensioner.
Have a good day.
julie xx

This is very good. One of those poems that you know goes much deeper, but you can't grasp exactly why. Frustrating sometimes.
Nolan &
(I've been catching up Julie, good work.)

new Nolan
Hello! Just seen knew two answer comments from you
thankyou so much. It was from walk western road and poem, The Eccentric Gentleman,met and photoed,again paper never put in,walked on this is the decorations in the tree. Wow! Thankyou it was beautiful scene and had camera that day take about Ray's not mine!
No been very difficult three four weeks up to date,
with all done and did and happened, Cancelled show,
in three weeks,couldn't wear glasses on bridge nose,
from mechanical clothes shop rail fall,involved quite
few etc; gruesome details. etc;
Anway do hope you are keeping well.
I had break wasn't sure first if broken wrist,plus nose.etc; cuts and bruises out this world. But can type now. I only just started one lesson for a singing I joined with others,and taught we are had miss three weeks. Going Tuesday once week now can get about! We are taught professional no sheet music
amazing! I had job go passed that shop at first naturally.
And our show L "Dusty Springfield" Worthing we bot going had be cancelled. Show coming up midday,May 5th
be nice! "Let's Dance". Then also had in wonderful cat "Jazz" now more news put,on last poem?
Who while in bed Ray brought post and Who it was from gobsmacked?? Must read your great love poems,and
catch up now can wear glasses,spell correctly read all. Looks sunny day! "Jazz" in yesterday my neighbour's cat. Bit in last poem??
Have a good day and many thanks take care.
cavalcaderl julie x

This is one of the best poems of yours that I've read. It's very beautiful and brightly coloured. I can imagine it as an abstract expressionist painting. Lovely.

well-wisher
Hi I am thrilled you look back on
some of my work,just lost comment story
part back to you. So try again later explains,
how doing things now,made me so observant.
One day went too 1st day base centre to join and write etc; taught,all ages,and some homeless,clever,we taught put your name,spell it out writing about yourself,and given topic,also postcards pictures,influence the mind think,say a Rose,don't just say that,look into it,it's petal and colours, how it servives winds and rain and trials and story.
Bring it into relaxing in chiar soft music,fountains
I could massge shoulders relax them etc;spiritual doing churhc then. Some sent to Big issue got paid.All ages one 80. Some could draw paint sketch,play instruments act all brought out filmed,dance sings,practice,room hired Odeon cinema Brighton huge! On screen pay a bit,snacks after,hosts give best reader,call out names.Wow! Chris Ellison Then The Bill,and all got a plastic oscar,but see one on screen,I read with cat mask and tail,etc;wore tail threaded through black trouser belt,black jumper,say poem "Green Eyes" quite a job mask on face,plus plastic black cuffs,ugh! so large see oneself on screen,and Joe Mangle x neighbours. One 80 did rap! we joined in fun!
All cd done,free us all,and books printed in but could give donation of course,finished after three years re-furbishing now open. Took me about year work,computer Ray set up,then read AbcTales didn't know doing comp so tried,just typed. What had or story thought quite good for me one was about late 'Jade Goody' didn't put name.
Making my belated mum's adopted Aunt found in Flea market Brighton Ray saw,£1.50p No it can't be it was
if photo is clear and good,one can send it too Wool company that paint it on etc;send all the wool colours to me,make tapestry, Ray set clothes wooden rail,take weight of it,as worked with a hooked latchet all colours,of her adopted Great Aunt,but colour cheeks,far
too bright ugh! how sat by window early till dusk,cos sky blues shades work difficult. I think wrote why! "The Royal Pavilion Best Ever" was so special,on here,as daughter got married there,registry on hottest day of the year,onto hotel reception,paid by Ray's first or 2nd motor bike road accident. May like to read sometime.
One day when I could,walk long way with,daughter's snappy Jack Russel had bad hips,had be done. Sunny day I looked up in the window,bric-a-brac shop. OMG!
There it was she adopted mum's Aunt, holding the monacle,in her hand,like the little photo mum the showed me,got home told Ray,it was only £12 circular one,I remember mum told me about her when I was small. Again shop near clock tower keeps,huge! albums of fashion ladies and regency,very heavy albums to lift,friend helped me turn page,there she was postcard size,truly amazing.
Shop does all kind of things,Titanic metal plates many other things,interesting. Gave a way the tapestry,family member then too big keep!
mum always showed me small photo of her,there it was.
No I can't paint or play,or read music,only eventually,stopping in making toys pattern or knit,joining many things,after many years,not being able do anything. The baby then bring up Ray worked.
I haven't got glasses on,so closing for a cup of tea,
so you see I am more of an agony aunt,understands all
that writers write,sad happy glad whatever. One has to have been there first,to understand others within reason.
julie xx