The Hamilton’s Daffodil garden

Often we would sneak into the Hamilton’s Daffodil garden
hoping to catch a glimpse of them.
Their thighs were like springs which would propel them from one leaf to another.
We had gained enough experience to be able to catch them;
glass jars and fish nets were necessities on our 'missions'.
We would cut off their long translucent wings and tie their legs together;
"grasshopper racing" was what we called it.
Keeping them in our glass jars we would breed champions,
and nothing less.
Mother would often let out a terrified scream whenever we brought them into our room.
Father would hold his newspapers down and take a second look at what we were holding.
But don’t all fairytales come to an end?
Mrs. Hamilton had finally realized that we were sneaking into her lawn
"violation of privacy" she called it;
we never saw those yellow daffodil swaying with the wind again.
When time took it all away,
we only had a jar of grasshopper wings left.

~1999, Grasshopper racing~

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | September 28, 2008 - 16:11

Dandelion - this has such a charming naivety about it. Strangely enough I was only just today talking to my daughter about all the insects, caterpillars, lady-birds and the like, that she used to keep in countless matchboxes in her bedroom, when she was a child.

These lines, for me, say it all:-

" ...we never saw those yellow daffodil swaying with the wind again.
When time took it all away,..."

A poem much enjoyed.

Tina

DandelionSeeds | October 2, 2008 - 13:05

thank you.
glad you liked it.

love,
DandelionSeeds