Aaaaaaachoooo ..

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I've been in bed
wiff a bad head
ma body sore n chilly.
Live on ma own
(glad ov a phone)
altho it's a bit silly.
Av realised no one is there,
To make me tea
or stroke ma hair.

"Get well real soon"
you bet, a do
Av shaken off this cold n floo ..

So if you thinkin' ov a moan,
ree membrus folk who're ill alone xx

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Comments

jolono | June 30, 2012 - 19:34

Nice poem, liked the way it was written. Hope you get better!

denni1 | June 30, 2012 - 20:39

Awww.. thanks, but am well !! I appreciate your comment. Just started this writing malarkey !! Denise xx