A Short Shaggy Dog's Tail

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from the ABC set Balancing Acts (short stories)

MY DIARY

Now I have been sent to my room and I don’t understand why.
So I am crying.
There was a long list of chores for me when I came home from school.
At the bottom it said that when I had finished I could make a prawn sandwich and go and play in the park until dark. It is not easy to say when exactly ‘dark’ is but I think I was home before it happened.
The list was mostly easy stuff, and I like looking after the house because it is my house and also my home. The only chore I did not like was writing letters because there was no one to help me.
OK, maybe there was a bit of a mess in the kitchen but that was Cindy’s fault because her bowl was two filled.
I did tried my hardestest. I ticked everything on the list and then went to the park.
When I came back mummy had a meltdown. I was told to ‘go to your room.’

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Chores List

Bring in wood for the stove

Clean black shoes for school

Make your bed

Tidy your cupboard

Do your homework

Write thank you notes to Auntie Linda
and Auntie Clara for your birthday presents

Feed dog cat
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Comments

Denzella | January 22, 2012 - 07:53

Hello Don Michael,

Have I got it right the boy has fed the cat to the dog. Sorry bit dim in mornings...actually afternoons too. Evenings no...I'm usually all right. Liar, liar, pants on fire!

Really enjoyed your story thought it had a lot in it for so few words. Well done.

Good luck in the competiion.

Don Michael | January 22, 2012 - 08:02

Thanks,
Did you manage to spot the spelling mistake?
Don Michael

Denzella | January 22, 2012 - 10:25

Hello again,

Yes I did...two for too

Still liked it though!

Silver Spun Sand | January 26, 2012 - 14:14

Just noticed this, Don. Very much enjoyed;-)

Tina

Don Michael | January 26, 2012 - 18:22

Hello Silver Spun Sand,
Glad you found some amusement.
This was my first post for a year and it was short.
I have been concentrating on 'The Prodigal Housekeeper' which is just about finished.
Hope I will be more active here soon,
Hope all is well,
Don

Don Michael | January 27, 2012 - 20:21

Tina,
Sorry this was a duplicate
Don

scratch | February 22, 2012 - 22:15

I hope that you will be more active as well.

skinner_jennifer | March 3, 2012 - 15:54

I too really enjoyed reading.

Thankyou for sharing.

Jenny.

Don Michael | March 3, 2012 - 19:53

Hello Jenny,
Glad you had some fun and thanks for letting me know,
Best wishes,
Don

lavadis | July 31, 2012 - 17:37

i just noticed you have stopped posting - your work is wonderful so please start again

Don Michael | August 1, 2012 - 07:37

Hello Lavadis,
Thanks for your kind comment, I will try harder and post more - soon!
I have been busy finishing and publishing ‘The Prodigal Housekeeper’. It is being well received and I have started another novel.
Best regards, Don Michael

Don Michael | August 1, 2012 - 07:40

Lavadis,
Will pop over and see how you and what you are doing,
Don