I see horses galloping like saffron wind
Across the sunset prairie sky,
With manes and tails aflame with streams of fire;
Bright steeds of cumulus design,
White winged and wondrous,
Wrought of clouds and molten gold,
They draw the chariot of the Sun
Through violet canyons of the coral-cave sea
Where Neptune's treasures lie.
Warriors of godly mien upon these stallion wraiths
Appear to ride,
With cirrus cloaks embroidered by each shaft of light
Full billowing behind curved sunglanced swords,
Their prancing wake paints mackerel patterns
In the tide.
Then suddenly, from far away,
Of dark descent -
Wild storms like cohorts form to chase them;
Dense, then tenuous, swiftly peppering the sky,
They surge from nowhere, turning on a second's arc
As one -
This millionfold mind - myriads of starlings sweep
In a blizzard of oil-slick wings,
Tempering the rose gold petals of the air;
They spiral, locust like, then land
To drape like tiny jet-black beads on cobweb strings.
As evening's ritual is unfurled they dive and swirl again,
Then sieve through a fretwork of dereliction -
Dark streamers dancing
With the ghosts of the West Pier ....
Once a proud and princely pleasure ground
Whose days have rusted all away
To become atoms of seaside memories.
The wind lies down along the beach
As crimson slowly prisms to purple
Then through indigo to black;
Soft shadows sigh across the haunted sea ....
Then darkly rise
Velveting the vaulted vesper Heaven
Where only Goddesses may linger, scattering their jewels
Among the aeon-counting stars.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | February 13, 2012 - 19:44
You have painted a masterpiece here, Indrani. Such rich colours you have in your palette, and the way you mix them...such expertise.
Very much enjoyed.
Tina
Indrani Ananda | February 13, 2012 - 19:52
Indrani Ananda
Tina, you are always the first with your heartfelt comments. They are poems in themselves. I'm pleased you enjoyed this, and it makes it so worthwhile to be on here when there are fellow poets like you who appreciate people's efforts.
Thank you.
Indrani.
Florian | February 13, 2012 - 20:32
You see a lot of wonder in the world. So often I've heard the sunset described as "very nice" and even "spectacular" but always by people who seem disinterested and turn away. It is good to look at a sunset through you eyes.
tcook | February 15, 2012 - 19:56
Having lived in Brighton for 22 years, we moved away just over 18 months ago and the sunsets and the starlings are what we miss most.
Indrani Ananda | February 20, 2012 - 18:39
Indrani Ananda
Thank you for your comment, Florian. If people take no notice of nature and the sky, it shows they cannot be poets in the true sense of the word.
Indrani.