The London Dungeon

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The London Dungeon

Take me to another place
A world where I can hide
Somewhere where I know myself
And feel my soul inside
Lead me from this ugly mess
This city lacking grace
These streets of dirty words and mouths
These doors that I can’t face
Remind me of another life
Where I can live and dream
A life where people did not lie
Where consciences were clean
Tell me that I can return
To countries where I smile
Where sun shines down onto my back
And I don’t feel I’m on trial
Help me to survive this phase
My fate that I have sown
Working day on day non-stop
Here helpless and alone
Move my mouth and make me talk
To those who give me time
Then they won’t think I am strange
Convince themselves I’m fine
If I could then I would beg
Of you to change my path
To lay each stone the other way
To make each smile a laugh
But I know that you are not
The guardian of my plight
And I know that if you were
You’d tell me I should fight
So I’ll just carry on right here
And hope that soon we’ll see
That one fine day I’ll spread my wings
And finally be free.

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Comments

Blessing | May 21, 2012 - 16:56

Thanks for sharing this with us.

salmanrushdiesp... | May 21, 2012 - 19:08

Yeah, London certainly can make a person feel like this.

This is a well-crafted poem, written in the ballad form. Can I suggest you break it up into quatrains? I think it would help if you paused between verses.

jolono | May 22, 2012 - 11:36

Thought this was brilliant.

laurapayne | May 22, 2012 - 15:04

Well done - thanks for sharing and joining - wonderful tone - love the quatrain idea from Salman R too

Jalileh | June 6, 2012 - 14:43

Thanks to all, yes good idea to break it up!