The Glow of Love

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from the ABC set Twisted Tales; works in progress

The glow of love

Quand j'arrive a ma petite mort
J'espere que cela puisse durer toujours
Et ensuite j'ouvre mes yeux et te regarde
Et dans tes yeux je vois l'extase...
Parceque...
J'ai fini...

©Jack Hughes 2012

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Silver Spun Sand | April 10, 2012 - 19:46

Well my French isn't that good, but I could understand this, and it is very beautiful. And I like the ending too...sweet;-)

Tina

jensenred | April 10, 2012 - 21:53

Thanks Tina, It's supposed to be a self-deprecating piece that takes a wry look at love poetry. The original piece in English was a performance poem as part of a stand-up poetry set. I'll post the English version when i find it. x