Space swirls in my eyelids
above my misty lake below,
no lake is too deep like a
bridge over, reached me up
into your cool, dim lights
where a quiet, gentle song
cradles me in into safety.
Ghosts try to snatch me in
back under the water yet I
am safe in you arms, under
your wings now in feathery
comfort hold my head in to
soft chest hair curls over
caress all over I feel new
Rained on by willows tears
tired body sinking in sand
my comfert angel leans and
gives me a spiced loving x
I can only stare in wonder
soft beautiful wide eyes I
know are full of my pains.
Comments
skinner_jennifer | October 3, 2010 - 14:10
Hi Kahdai,
How wonderful this poem is, I love the lines I am safe in
your arms, under your wings in feathery comfort hold my
head in to soft chet hair curls.
Simply beautiful.
Jenny.
Highhat | October 3, 2010 - 14:19
Hi Kahdai- you might want to write 'space swirls behind my eyelids'- makes more sense methinks. Is easily a beautiful poem. Very moving!
pia;)
Kahdai | October 3, 2010 - 20:11
Thank you Jenny, yet it not quite finished. ;)
Pia I did have a different more emotional version with that instead, here I was more just trying to line it up neatly (maybe thats silly?) K x
Highhat | October 3, 2010 - 20:32
If it's a draft then you can do whatever you like with it
;) pia
Kahdai | October 3, 2010 - 20:57
finished now... Ii think... ;) K
Highhat | October 4, 2010 - 11:13
It is still very moving-filled with love and emotion well done ;)
pia xx
Kahdai | October 4, 2010 - 16:12
thanks ^^ xx