Tomorrow

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Published by Kahdai on December 5, 2010 - 21:07
from the ABC set Me, you & my world

Tomorrow, I will see
my best freind in
the whole world,
even though she
is in an alien
land to me, I
dare to go
explore.

With you
to show me
how to cloud-
navigate, I have
not worries about
stepping into your
new world, tomorrow.

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Love the structure of this one, Kahdai - it's like wings! 'cloud-navigate' is a wonderful word ;)

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic! Yes, I see wehn ii tilt my head! Cloud-
navigating is a little nostalgia for my other magical freind ;) xxx K

I hope you show your friend this poem, I would think they would be chuffed, :}}}

This is beautifully written Kahdai.

Jenny.

Thanks shoe and Jenny :) x

I agree,cloud-naviagte, amazing :) A beautiful poem.

Beeme xx

thank you Beeme dear :) xx