GOODBYE DAD

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from the ABC set POETRY

This day of parting came too swiftly -
Too many stories left untold:
Fly like a bird now if you want to,
For you're no longer frail, nor old;
Take our Mum's hand and watch from heaven
O'er us you love and leave behind;
Dear Mum and Dad, loved Nan and Grandad
You're out of sight, not out of mind.

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Comments

Denzella | May 22, 2012 - 07:32

Linda,

Beautifully expressed.

Moya

Linda Wigzell Cress | May 22, 2012 - 08:44

This little verse was all I could manange for scattering the ashes.Thanks for liking.
Linda

jolono | May 22, 2012 - 11:31

I also thought it was beautiful linda.

The Royster | May 30, 2012 - 12:01

Linda
Your way with words leaves me with tears in my eyes.
No doubt he is watching over his lovely family.
Bless you all
Roy

steve_elliott04 | June 4, 2012 - 00:11

Simplicity results in beauty here, Linda. A really great piece.

Steve.

Linda Wigzell Cress | June 4, 2012 - 09:04

Thank you Steve. Means a lot.
Linda