Although you loved him, you also reveled
in his humiliation, when his older surety
was ridiculed, his place in the world...a schism, irreparable.
You, a witness, unable to acknowledge
the pleasure in this administered damage,
instead admired his footsteps, your fledgling
predator to forever protect his greatest pretense.
However, from under those feathers of yours',
Swan and Peacock both have eyes of stone
and flashing infrequently is the pleasure you take
from what you never would condone
Comments
lenchenelf | February 17, 2010 - 10:31
Interesting one LittleD, lots of emotional contradictions Lxx
MistakenMagic | February 17, 2010 - 15:42
'However, from under those feathers of yours',
Swan and Peacock both have eyes of stone'
- love these lines ld, well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
Chundar | February 17, 2010 - 17:03
I like this, it shows the inner hypocrite we all harbour
littleditty | February 18, 2010 - 21:26
Thanks chaps xx
Prettyrose | April 19, 2011 - 20:42
hi littleditty just want to say i love your username made me smile :)))) well done on your poem, interesting and well written :))))
littleditty | April 19, 2011 - 21:12
thanks Prettyrose, glad you thought so - your username is smiley too!