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Published by marionwozere on August 12, 2012 - 12:37
from the ABC set Style vs Substance

Your secrets, your confessions
are dark crystals
slipping quietly
into my ocean
glinting deep
green
heavy they rest
on the sea bed
hidden
inside
silent
forever.

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Comments

Sooz006 | August 12, 2012 - 12:57

This is full of subversive sexual connotation ... lovely.

marionwozere | August 12, 2012 - 22:10

oh, yes, so it is...I never noticed that before, tee hee ;)

ScoZen | August 13, 2012 - 17:27

Ahh little Janner.
Could this ere be a tale from the Swilly?
Regards

ps I really need to read more of your tales.

marionwozere | August 20, 2012 - 11:30

Ere I be Stonehouse all the way innit, mate, innit :)

sue dinum | August 29, 2012 - 21:02

Succinct and beautiful, Marion.

Trev

moonphish | November 9, 2012 - 18:40

what a beautifully dark little wonder of a poem this is - alvin