“Full Stop”

Nathan this is great! It speaks volumes and so eloquently. Well done A smashing poem . Val x

Cheers Val. I am actually very confident about this poem, but not in the arrogant way of course ;-p

Thanks for your lovely comment!

Nathan.

Well done! It's great to be woo-ed by punctuation, especially a sweet question mark - good stuff Nathan :)

Thanks LD - (that is so lazy) ;-p

Yes, I agree, punctuation is vital when trying to woo someone, especially when that someone doesn't like dashes and semicolons ;-p

Nathan.

An interesting poem, Nathan, much enjoyed.

I often ask myself, when is a dash a hyphen and likewise, when is a hyphen a dash? Oh dear, I am completely befuddled;-)

Tina

Hyphen
The building will re-open in December.
This is an award-winning book.
This paint is sky-blue.

Dash
I'm thinking of going to the pub - do you want to come?

I hope this helps Tina.
Thanks for the comment ;-)

Nathan.

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This is genius Nathan! I love the whole idea for the poem, it's so creative :) I hope this gets a cherry!

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic. I'm glad you like the poem so much ;-)
As for the cherry, I don't know, it's up to the 'cherry fairy' ;-p

Nathan.

Ha there it is! Told you so :)

Hehe, yep! I guess you're like a Chinese fortune cookie! ;-p

Cheers!

Nathan.

Gosh Nathan...
You rock!
this poem is so inspiring!
where do you get all these awesome ideas from????
I'd love to know

- Miss_Poet.

Wow, thanks Miss Poet. You're too kind.

As for my ideas, I don't really know where they come from. Sometimes I just sit down and develop them as I go along, but usually they just hit me like a train ;-p

However, I think that my inspiration mainly comes from singular moments in life rather than those big 'themes' like love, death, etc. It's the same for this poem- I focused on that one single moment when a girl smiles and then tried writing about the moments that led up to this smile.

I hope you'll find this logical ;-p

Again, thanks for your lovely comment.

Nathan.

Wow ,This is a very smart idea, I'm not suprised it was cherry-picked.
Keep writing cuz ya Know we'll Love it ;)
Love yaz xx

You're too kind Yazmin. Thanks for that lovely comment. I always value what you have to say. Love x

*Muscles in through throng of lady admirers*

I saw him first! :) Hello Nathan, just dropping by to find out how you're doing and when can we expect more of your beautiful poetry?

Magic xxx

Hey Magic. Nice of you to pop in ;-)

I was buried in college work for the past few weeks so I had no time to put my pen to paper. It was really frustrating, but the work is pretty much finished and I'm going to have much more time now. I promise to post something soon and catch up with all the work I missed from you, Tina, Tamara and Yazmin. That's quite a lot of catching up I have! ;-p

'Till next time!

Love, Nathan.

A very interesting poem and original idea I must say. If you said that to me in a bar how could I refuse ;)

Great read keep up the good work (Y)

Well well, this poem obviously made me slightly more popular ;-p

Sorry about that- just lame! Anyways, thanks for your comment, much appreciated.

Nathan.

Oh wow this is smoothly done! I loved it!

(^_^)
best regards,
yReNe

Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I'm glad this poem got such a great response.

Nathan.

Love it! Love it! Love it! Brilliant!

Chris

And I love your comments Chris! ;-D

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