shit

Sounds like you're letting out a lot of steam there, Nazi. If this happens to be based on a personal situation...I hope you're alright.

All the best.

(Interesting poem, nonetheless. ;P )

Thanks for your comment, Jessica, and your concern.

It's based on many situations I've had with human beings over the years - people never cease to revolt and sicken me - but the most prominent situation, the one that inspires most of my misanthropy, is the one described here:

http://abctales.com/story/archie-macjoyce/end-my-youth

And in answer to your concerned pondering, no, I am still not alright, after five years. Perhaps I never will be. I don't think I will ever get over the essential putridness of humanity.

Archie...... Is that you under another pole of deed....?

If not the king is dead, long live the king.

That poems full of shit by the way. ;))

And Archie, I know that the apostrophe is missing ;))

The secret of your imperfect punctuation is safe with me, good lord scratch.

Quite...

I want this to be the 'If' of our time. I want schoolchildren to study it in the year 2200. If schools still exist. If children still exist.

'By the 21st Century, a wave of realisation had reached the few that Western life had no intrinsic meaning, or rather, the meaning of life was governed by the tabloid-reading hand feeders. As such, these brave few faced disenfranchisement from a society which had long forgotten the value and beauty of the physical world - a society committing instead to existing in planes entirely of human creation, fooled into thinking this was reality'.

Although someone more snivelling than me might point out that using one's own moral superiority to denounce other people's 'shit moral superiority' is a smidgen of a contradiction - somehow I don't think you care NWB! No matter - I like :)

Yes this pretty much sums up people and society. You should write for the Daily Mail.

I *do* write for the Daily Mail. And for the Guardian. They are very similar. One is a Bible for right-wing bigots, the other a Bible for pseudo-left-wing ones.

Steve, I'm glad you're not a sniveller. Many, MANY people are. And they normally read the Guardian.

Calm doon, ya bam, yi ..

Whoa, disturbing poem, mate!

I hope you're okay.

This is shit,.