Half-lives I

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from the ABC set Passed on

Watching clocks and making hay,
skiving someone’s busy day.
Beg an hour, taking two
to mend a door and have a brew.

It’s nothing new.

Chilling winter evenings,
tunes and chats in the living room
but always leaving far too soon,
to return on a summer afternoon
and puff the world back to health
through the smoke of a sneaky cig or two,
and a little bit of stealth.

Then, on a wet November Saturday...

Venus and Mars,
so long passing in distant orbit,
just a momentary tug of gravity
across the void,
collide gratefully and with much relief
in Church Street, York.

It’s been a long time.

Water under the bridge, sure,
and though we roll and tumble in the flood,
few regrets.
I’m glad you’re around, kid.
Know that on this land the fire’s always lit
and your lease still good.

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Comments

maggyvaneijk | August 7, 2011 - 13:26

You've packed a lot into this poem, it's chaotic in places but that could reflect the speaker's emotions. There are some beautiful images my favourite stanza has to be the last, where "we roll and tumble in the flood", stunning. There's the tiniest of typo in the line "but always leaving far to soon".

Parson Thru | August 7, 2011 - 16:01

Thanks Maggy. You should see what I've unpacked from it! Chaos reigns right enough. Not sure this poem will ever be completed. Thank you as ever for your comments, always helpful and supportive.