This was never a happy home
and now it's not a home at all
Separate beds, fights and silence
The only thing holding it together
is the fact that it won’t be ours soon
Business went down the pan, you see
Been down there since I started
truth be told
Up at 3am every damn morning
to dig myself deeper in debt
and make a good living for other men
I don’t think we know how to cope
What to do next that doesn’t involve
screaming, fighting and smashing the place up
So we scream, fight
and the place gets smashed up
as the kids look on
I tried a side-line…
tried a few
None of them worked
They never could
The bank manager knew
And the dairy manager
Seen a lot like me come and go
I just need to work out
who I owe
The bank?
or the dairy?
I think I’ll stick it to the bank
Good luck, Brian
- hope you’ve got a good story
You’ve had this coming
...
And now we’ve had our terminal fight
The knife is back in the kitchen drawer
and the worst is over
The kids are upstairs screaming
and she’s turning on them
Time to go
She’s hurling my stuff out the window
to entertain the neighbours
Obscenities violate the street
and my dad tells me I’m not going back this time
Too right, dad
It’s a real mess
Comments
Denzella | August 19, 2012 - 21:15
Hello,
What a great poem. A difficult subject made readable by the words you've chosen as well as the form.
Thought it was great.
Moya
Parson Thru | August 19, 2012 - 22:11
Thank you Moya. I really appreciate you saying that. A bit of chopping around as usual. Wouldn't really work in a limerick style - although... "There was a..."
sue dinum | August 29, 2012 - 21:17
Hope this wasn’t as close to home as it seemed, PT. Lots of angst, disappointment and unhappiness in this. Very well expressed.
Trev
Parson Thru | August 29, 2012 - 21:24
Hi Trev.
Close in one way. Very distant in another.
Thanks.