It seemed pure Innocence came
Seeping from your small, yet
Perfectly formed engaging mouth.
One act of kindness turned
My life spinning round
Like a mole stuck in
An hunters hole.
Yet to begin with this
New place I found myself
Entering,felt so safe and warm.
You took my self control
But your not having me whole.
Na na na na, oh no oh no.
When I finally saw the light
It was to late, you had
Entrapped me in your world
Of lies, just passing your
Time away.
Wanting some one else's happiness,
Just because you were lonely and
Sad.Not ever caring who you hurt.
You took my self control
But your not having me whole.
Na na na na, oh no oh no.
The truth is you
never could make me complete,
You were just a distraction
I wished I had never explored.
I would rather sell my soul
To the devil than
Have you once more.
Comments
Silver Spun Sand | March 13, 2012 - 09:07
Enjoyed this, prettyrose, and had a tune running through my head all the while;-)
Tina
Prettyrose | March 13, 2012 - 22:10
Hi Tina, I hope your well :)
Thank you so much, it means a lot you read my work and your lovely comments.
Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)
Trish :)
skinner_jennifer | March 15, 2012 - 12:07
Hi Prettyrose,
just read your piece of writing. Very good sentiments
behind the words, I liked the way it could almost be
lyrics to a piece of music.
Thanks for sharing.
Jenny.
Prettyrose | March 16, 2012 - 03:35
Hi Jenny :) hope your well :)
Thank you for your comments and taking the time to read my work, always appreciated.
Yes I was going to original create it as lyrics to a song but wasn't sure. well done picking up on that.
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing :)
Trish x
Prettyrose | March 16, 2012 - 03:37
Jenny, sorry I meant to say, was not originally going to use it as lyrics for a song, old bones aching again hehe.
trish x