Freedom from oppression,
cruel domination,
manipulation, exploitation,
– universal greed for gain;
freedom from the pace and stress, –
peers-pressuring excess;
freedom from imprisoning chain,
and from all ill-health, and pain;
freedom from my guilt and shame,
self-convicting, well-earned blame.
Freedom from the pull of habit,
– want to quit, but cannot snap it:
paradox, that strength for progress
comes with heavenly bonds of service:
quickened aptitude,
grace and gratitude.
Some have had to fight, with gun,
those who kill, enslave and maim;
some have had to flee, and run
to a place where once again
they their families may feed,
worship God, with godly creed, –
from coercion, and the greed,
of those power-abusers, freed.
Perfect freedom: coming kingdom,
perfect law, and no-one poor,
never crime, nor aggravation,
universal full submission
to that perfect legislation;
harmony, and satisfaction.
Comments
Highhat | October 7, 2011 - 18:17
Good Luck in the competition Rhiannow-
;)Pia
Silver Spun Sand | October 7, 2011 - 18:47
All the best for the competition, Rhiannow. A more than worthy entry.
Tina
Rhiannonw | October 7, 2011 - 20:40
Thank you Pia and Tina very much. I enjoyed working on it, and quite a bit of re-working!
Rh
ScoZen | October 8, 2011 - 17:09
Rhiannonw.
I hope many of your freedom wishes come true and the world, may, be a better place for it.
Rhiannonw | October 8, 2011 - 19:54
Hullo, ScoZen, thank you for reading and for your comment. I tried to think about the different things/people that bind or hurt – some we can work against, or help/pray for those trying to do so, while realising, that the complete freedom is to come, and to be trusted for, though some ideas of what real freedom is can be mistaken!
Rhiannonw | October 22, 2011 - 00:08
Thank you for that, Julie. Rh
Cavalcaderl | October 22, 2011 - 00:32
new Rhiannow
Words so true, all of this.
all the best in the competition.
Way you have brought all the words,
and images in good.
julie x