Hurricane Katia’s tail-edge

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from the ABC set Nature

(Llŷn peninsula, north-west Wales, September12&13)

Lashing, dying hurricane tail,
bashing, pushing, gusty gale:
whirling map-bag – whipping, slapping;
wrenching hat to make it rocket,
– swift uncapping –
safe in pocket.
Cliff-path aerial view
of heaving ocean, swelling, welling,
billows surging, restless, vast,
clashing spray plumes hurled with blast
on battered jagged rock-spikes cast;
wide-spread ‘horses’ rising, rearing,
– white manes flying, flecks bedecking.

Crashing, rushing waves on bays of sand,
surfers drifting in to land,
back again for riding, sliding,
dipping, slipping under,
– wind reviving glowing vigour.

September 14
Softened winds, a rippled ocean,
tranquil floor of turquoise-green,
or steely-grey, with sunlight bands of glittering gleam,
and cloud-shaped shadows here and there,
wild ‘white-horses’ drowned or sunk below,
to where
potential turbulence hugged, asleep,
down in depths of fathoms deep.

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Comments

Highhat | September 17, 2011 - 21:08

Nice contrasts- I enjoyed this

;)Pia

Rhiannonw | September 17, 2011 - 21:29

Thank you, Pia. An experience I wanted to get into words somehow! Hope you are well.
Rh

mark_yelland-brown | September 18, 2011 - 08:22

Thank you for this, really evocative!

Rhiannonw | September 18, 2011 - 17:15

Thank you, Mark!