A sunlit autumn walk

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from the ABC set Nature

Kington*, nestled among the hills,
where footpaths meet at the edge of Wales.
We take one leading to Castle Twt,
a neat ‘look-out’ mound, – but keep to the foot-
-path, in passing through the wood,
(if not, there’s a tin for the asked-for pound)
– bamboo and other exotics are found,
(it’s managed by gardeners for th’estate nearby),
autumn colours, a leafy sky,
everything dappled with bright sunlight,
a shimmering pool in a sheltered glade,
multiple species enjoying the shade;
‘but what is that?’ – a thin tree towers,
full of four-petalled, white, wild-rose-like flowers,
we’re puzzled, ‘wrong leaf, wrong season’, we haven’t a clue:
a stroller happened by, – and its name he knew;**

we soon emerge, to an over-valley view,
and descend to the Arrow, where branches frame
pools of light and shadows on dark, flowing shallows.

* not Knighton **euchryphia nymanensis

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Comments

fatboy74 | October 20, 2011 - 17:57

I like the poem rhiannon particularly the opening - I don't think you need to clarify that Kington isn't Knighton though, the scarce few that have heard of these towns will know the difference. enjoyed.

Rhiannonw | October 20, 2011 - 18:46

Thank you. I did think afterwards that I probably neednt have put that. I think it's because, despite living near them, I easily say the wrong one!Rh

fatboy74 | October 20, 2011 - 20:26

easily done I suppose, there's just an h between them!

L G Meadows | October 21, 2011 - 09:22

I like the notations, feel like I've learned something this morning!

Rhiannonw | October 21, 2011 - 09:31

Good!, and thanks Rh