The Dead Eyed Whispers

*boxing up my reality so I am easier to digest ' like the last lines of an otherwise brilliant poem .

Some great lines/word choice, 'seasoned with assumptions' fab.

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wahey! Thank you! Am uber delighted to be pick of the day and to get a cherry!!! :))) Off to click more google ads!

I like a poem you have to read a couple of times before you can comprendo. Well done on yet another cherry russiandoll and pick of the day ;)

A very powerful peice. Congrats on the cherry!
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Thanks so much guys :)

Copying darkenwolf here but yeah -
A very powerful peice. Congrats on the cherry!

xDrew

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Liked this very much!
Individuality versus pressure to conform - so deftly expressed in not that many lines.
Well done!

Andrée :)

Thank you for all feedback/comments, appreciate that guys.

LOL at Blighters rock, too true!

Amlee you're spot on.

Ta guys :)

Great poem Russiandoll. Really really great.

I felt every line.

Kit

Thank you Kit. Love your little bio on your stories page :))

A great poem, sharp and striking, my favourite line: "Trying to fit big ideas, into small minds", also reminds me of your name Russian doll and those Matryoshka's fitting into each other.

Thanks Maggy :)

Ha. if maggyv likes it you really are a star. Great poem, bitter and bitey.

:)) Thanks again for reading and commenting - hugely appreciated :)

There is so much to commend this poem. It's taken me far too long to get round to reading it - I feel rather miffed!

Thoroughly deserving of all the praise, and then some.

Super.

Scratch.

Thank you so much, what a great comment. I take a lot of cathartic comfort from this piece! Thx again for taking the time to give feedback.