Through Their Skin

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The dream stealer came, by day, not by night
And snuck up in a way that gave no-one a fright
She simpered in slowly
Agreeable
Sweet
And all the while knowing, how to take out their feet
Like a parasite preying she seeks out a host
Then slowly weaves in with who offers the most
‘So what do you hope for?’ she’d ask, as they fell
And trusting, like sunshine, they’d think and they’d tell
And in return she gave
Nothing
But she soaked it all in
And they’d feel their spark leaving
Through their eyes, through their skin
Identities stolen
Lives to rebuild
You can keep all your money
It’s your dreams that were killed
Not a glimpse of a conscience
You’ll pick up her slack
But she’s ever so pretty as folk fold, at her back
The dream stealer came, by day, not by night
And lingered a while, in the warmth of their light

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Comments

scratch | January 17, 2012 - 21:22

Russiandoll, I feel privileged to be the first to comment on this precise and well delivered poem. "and they'd feel their spark leaving..." a superlative line and image. That poetic quality is exactly what keeps me on this site. I LOVED this poem.

russiandoll | January 17, 2012 - 21:55

Thank you soooooo much for commenting & for your feedback Scratch, very much appreciated :)

russiandoll | January 17, 2012 - 22:31

YAY the cherries!!! Thank you abctales :)))

blighters rock | January 18, 2012 - 00:26

Sinister and teasing, this reminds me of the drug that is television.

russiandoll | January 18, 2012 - 00:28

cool observation Blighters Rock - thx for commenting :)

Archie_Macjoyce | September 21, 2012 - 22:51

Hmmm... This reminds me of a girl I once knew...

Brilliant poem. Very deep and emotionally engaged.

russiandoll | September 21, 2012 - 23:46

Maybe we knew the same girl ;)

Thanks again for the comment Archie. I was in a moment of 'well I bloody never' white hot epiphany when I wrote that... lol