Love and War

Hello Tina,
a very thought provoking poem.

Thankyou for the read.

Jenny. xx

Jenny - thank you.

Tina xx

Very good this Tina, particularly enjoyed penultimate stanza. :-)

Fatboy - much appreciate your views, as always. Glad you enjoyed;-)

Tina

One moment, one little boy, a multitude of emotions,
yes, thought provoking.

Shoe - how well you put it. Thank you.

Tina

A he let him get away :D am I right? It's a lovely vague poem anyway Tina :j I like the second part K xx

I guess there is not 'right' or 'wrong' in this one, Kahdai.

The narrator has left it up to the individual reader to form his/or her's own conclusion;-)

Tina xx

Ohr well I see the other side he could have shot his back running away :/ ... I prefer my one :) K xx

If you look very closely, Kahdai, you may see that there are even more than two sides...;-)

Very enjoyable poem Tina x:) As always, so well written & a delight to read x:)

Firebird, glad you enjoyed and thanks for telling me.

Tina x

ohno am missing a lot :/

Ohk Ii think it was a small overburdened ass and he let it go for its little brown face instead of shooting it because ii guess thats what hes meant to do when it gets to tired to carry him? K

Very atmospheric, Tina. A beautifully written and moving poem - and a fitting tribute. Well done!

Magic xxx

Thank you so very much, Magic. I felt I could not let the day pass without marking it in my own way, and I am so pleased that you saw that;-)

Tina xxx

I like this Tina - especially the last two stanzas

My thanks to you, insert;-)

Tina

I can only echo what everyone else has said. Well done.

:--) xxx

Thank you, David. Much appreciated.

;-)xxx