Now She is Six...

Hello Tina,

do you know, this is one of the sweetest poems you've
written, I could just see the little six year old
playing in that imaginary world, that children do
love to go into.

Yes I could really see some beautiful imagery in
this piece.

Thankyou for the read.

Jenny.

Hello there, Jenny. So pleased you enjoyed this one.

Someone once said that childhood is a place, and not a time, and I definitely agree. Have a sunny day;-)

Tina

love that, wand out of a loo brush, really good tina. :-)

I agree, this is such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed and really beauitful imagery.

Beeme xx

Lovely poem; 'spritz the sunshine' what a great line!

Very lovely-

bury her nose
in damask tipped
petals of a rose –

loved these lines especially

;)Pia

Loved it-so you. Lisax

new Silver-Spun-Sand
Really cute and lovely,
the last stanza:
and know exactly
when to put down
her bouncy ball-
bury her nose
in damask tipped
petals of a rose-
captured
by the magic
of it all.
Another gem for you.
julie xx

fb - so pleased you thought so, and thanks;-)

Tina

Many thanks, Beeme;-) Glad you enjoyed.

Tina

Well, hello there, Lisa. Long time no speak;-) Hope you are OK, and thanks, so very much for taking the trouble to read this and comment, so kindly. Have a good week;-)

Tina x

Thought you might like this one, Julie. I guess it almost had your name on it;-) Have a sunny week.

Tina xx

this is lovely. love the sounds, rhythm and movement of the poem.

great ending, also; pure magic ;)

cheers,

jose hernandez diaz.

Thanks so much for that, matt...pleased you liked;-)

Tina

I just love roses, don't you Pia? My favourite rose ever is Rosa Rugosa. We have a hedge of them, both ruby and white along the edge of our garden.

Pleased you enjoyed this, and I really appreciate your telling me;-)

Tina;-)

Many thanks, Jose. Pleased you appreciated those 'little things'...but then, you would;-)

Tina

This poem tells everything that needs to be told. Beautiful sentiments!

Thanks, barry. I really do appreciate it when you take the time to read my stuff. It means a lot;-)

Tina

Oh, to be six again! This is just beautiful, Tina, definitely one of my favourites of yours and really tugged a chord with me - so comical and magical :)

Congrats on the cherries and hope you are well, thanks for such a delightful read :)

Rachel xx

Rachel - thanks, so very much...and now you have made me feel awfully guilty. I noticed your latest (congrats on the cherry, by the way) but I haven't had time to read it yet. It looks very interesting and don't want to rush it, so shall rectify the situation tomorrow morning;-)

In the meantime, thanks again for your lovely comment.

Tina xx

I read this because it's in the cherry picked. I liked it a lot.

Hi there, cormacru;-) Thanks for reading and I'm pleased you enjoyed.

Tina

No need to feel guilty at all, Tina - there's so much to read on here, I know exactly what it's like! Hope you enjoy mine as much as I enjoyed this, and thank you - you have such a good way with words, even in your comments! ;)

Enjoy your weekend and again, thanks for the wonderful read :)

Rachel xx

;-) I sure did enjoy yours, Rachel, and even broke off from my hoovering to read it. Trouble is, I don't feel like going back to it now.

And thank you, for a wonderful read;-)

Tina xx

Sweet, pretty and evocative, a lovely poem.

Thanks, shoe. Much appreciate your taking the trouble to read this, and letting me know you enjoyed. Have a peaceful weekend;-)

Tina