THE CHOSEN ONES ( PART TEN )

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from the ABC set Stories

It had been an arduous journey for the two families, they had been travelling for two days and
two nights, Ivan wanted to put as much space between them and the hunters. Luckily they had not
seen anyone else on their journey. They pulled up
the wagons, Ivan had decided they had gone far
enough.

Evelyne was a lot better now, although still upset, she had managed to drive one of the wagons,
which gave Meradith a chance to sleep, Fern and
Bella drove the other wagon, with Jay up front
with them while Ivan got some sleep.

"We will make camp here, we need to rest," said
Ivan.
Meradith collected some Kindling, it was imperative
she build a fire before nightfall. She took her
piece of flint from her purse, she wore on a belt
around her waist and managed to get a spark going,
soon she had a fire.

The fire was burning well, Jay thought the flames
looked like dragons rising from the embers, his
mother would tell him stories of dragons breathing
fire, they were his favourite stories.

Once they had unloaded everything and seen to the
animals, Ivan decided he would search for food. As
he was walking, he came across a cave, he looked
around checking very carefully to make sure this
wasn't a bears cave, he crept in slowly, there
didn't seem to be any sign of life, but he knew you
could never be to careful, he thought he would come
back later.

Ivan managed to catch a couple of rabbits, but he
knew that between two families they would not last
very long. He told Meradith that if they were to
survive while he was gone, then he would have to
fish in the river, he knew the fish would be plentiful, he could catch enough to last them a
couple of days.

Meradith knew the dangers of fishing in open rivers, but she also knew they could starve. Now in
these days women were not hunters like men, who
learnt from their fathers, but Meradith had an idea. "Why don't I come out with you and you can
show me what to do?"
Ivan was not sure about that, but then he thought
about how long he could be away, he decided it was
a good idea.

He showed Meradith how to sharpen a branch into a
spear, she had a go and found it quite easy, then
he told Bella and Fern to stay at the camp and
look after Jay and Evelyne, Evelyne said she would
keep the fire burning.

Meradith crept stealthily through the thicket with
her husband, he knew only to well the dangers of
being out in the open. They hid in some long grass,
they could see an opening where the river ran, it
looked so inviting.

Ivan sensed that all was quiet, then he signaled to
Meradith to creep forward, telling her to stay down
on her belly. They crawled through the long grass,
Ivan smelt the air, everything seemed okay. As they
reached the edge of the river, he told Meradith to
stay down and watch carefully, then he slithered
down the bank into the river, he could see the fish
clearly, he took his spear, then took a deep breath
and dived under the water. He had been under for
quite a while, Meradith became anxious, but knew
Ivan was an expert. When finally he came up, he
had managed to spear ten fish which sat neatly on
top of one another on the spear.

Suddenly the birds began to fly, a sure sign of
hunters. Quickly she saw Ivan climb up the bank,
then they both moved through the grass and back to
the camp as quickly as they could. They managed to
get back without being seen, or so they thought,
the hunters must have gone another way.

That night they had a wonderful feast, the best
food they had tasted in days. Ivan took Meradith in
his arms, he told her not to worry, that he would
be back as soon as he could, he felt sure Nathen
was still alive. He kissed Meradith, she felt a
longing for him, it had been a long two days. Soon
they fell asleep in each others arms.

To be continued ........

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Comments

Highhat | March 29, 2011 - 20:28

Jenny- this is a lovely installment. You give so much attention to all the characters it is a delight. It is all so emotional and sometimes I feel like crying. This is good that you bring out feelings in the reader. well done
;)Pia

pinda | March 29, 2011 - 21:18

Agree with Pia, each characters role in this tale gets described really well and the way you track back and forth to Nathen and the two familieis is brilliant.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter, as you might have gathered by now :]

X
Pinda

SteveM | March 30, 2011 - 09:53

Nice one Jenny... still on the trail of Nathen. The impression of how hard it is to live being a hunter/gatherer is well thought out.

Steve

skinner_jennifer | March 30, 2011 - 10:30

Hi Pia,

you have really cheered me up with your wonderful
comment, I'm really flattered by such kind words.

Thankyou so much Pia, it means everything to me.

Jenny.

skinner_jennifer | March 30, 2011 - 10:32

Hi Pinda,

that is such a beautiful comment and I really do
appreciate your enjoying the story.

Thankyou so much for reading.

Jenny.

skinner_jennifer | March 30, 2011 - 10:34

Hi Steve,

It makes my day that you are still enjoying the
story, it's so good to know that I'm managing to
keep the story interesting.

Thankyou so much for your continuous support, it's
really appreciated.

Jenny.

well-wisher | April 12, 2011 - 17:54

Hello, Jenny. Again, another good chapter.
You describe all the action scenes very well,
especially the action of spear fishing and you give so much detail in your descriptions that its very easy for the reader to visualize them.

skinner_jennifer | April 12, 2011 - 18:00

Thankyou so much for your comment well-wisher, I'm
glad you are still enjoying the story.

That was very kind of you to say that I give a good
description, because I really want the reader to get
into the story themselves, if you know what I mean.

Again thankyou for reading and the great comment.

Jenny.

Kahdai | June 13, 2011 - 14:30

Jenny I really like the part about dragons in the fire! A few lines down I think you want to change
-never be /too/ careful :) K

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