Dwellers of the New World Chapter Two ( Pt 5 )

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from the ABC set Stories

The walk back, took Luke across the city. All the lights had been dimmed, as they always had at night, to save power.

Synthesizer music played out from the speakers. Couples stopped to checkout the gardens behind the crystal glass, where some exotic birds flew, for them there was no day or night, they lived in a strange world all of their own.

Luke thought about his mum, he didn't realise how bad she was, he wondered how she would manage, once he was a pilot like his father.
He thought about his mum being alone, so many things to think about.

As he neared home, his first idea was to go straight to the control centre, but then he decided he would go straight home.

After giving the information to enter the building they lived in, he
was walking down the corridor to their apartment, when all of a sudden he noticed the red emergency light flashing outside their door.

Picking up the pace, he was consciously worried that someone had broken in.

Reaching the door, he found it off the latch, a light appeared to be on. Now he was really worried.

'Should I walk straight in...or go and get help?' he thought to himself.

He decided to take his chances. Pushing open the door hard, he stormed in shouting, “Who's there!”

Max Pearce from the control centre was standing in the living room,
sorting out the alarm system.

“What the hell are you doing here Max?” Luke shrieked, partly glad that at least they hadn't been burgled, not that anyone could get passed
security anyway.

Max turned and looked at Luke, feeling just as unsure of what was going on.

“Your alarm system's been going off all night. Where's Lena? I had to break in, in case there was a problem.”

Luke then put two and two together, he realised what had happened.
“Mum's at the hospital, she collapsed, I think when she used her implant to get to hospital, she must have set the alarm off.”

“Oh! I see...what's happened to her...is she okay?”

“She collapsed,” said Luke, “but she's in safe hands now, so I'm sure she'll be fine.”

Max had just about fixed the alarm.

“I didn't only come over because of the alarm...I also came to speak with Lena about your father.”

“What do you mean?” asked Luke.

“Well, we've had word from the ship your father was on, that they have lost contact with Addie. It's been three days now since they were
able to speak with him.”

“But what's happened to him...is he okay?” questioned Luke.

“We don't know. Apparently the planet they were investigating, was full of underground tunnels, leading off of caves. They wanted to check them out, to see if there was any form of life. The ship lost contact, I'm afraid Addie and his crew only have four weeks of food, water and air.”

“What!” yelled Luke...”what the hell are you going to do? you're not
just going to leave them...please don't tell me you're giving up on them?” This was more than Luke could comprehend.

“Calm down Luke. No we're not leaving them. We have four more crystal ships docked at the moment, but only four pilots available. I know this is a lot to ask, but I need you – Sam – Jake and Alex to each
partner up with a pilot.”

“But Max! we're not qualified to fly yet, I haven't got my licence,” replied Luke.

Max assured him. “Look! Sam and Jake took their exam and passed two weeks ago, that just leaves you and Alex. I'll set everything up for you both to take exams as soon as possible. Then I will need to explain what the plans are. This is going to be a challenge Luke...but I have every faith in you.”

Suddenly Luke thought about his mates, they must be wondering what
happened to him.

There were so many things going around in Luke's head just at that moment, things were happening too fast, he found it hard to take it all in.

He checked his wrist communication, then remembered he'd turned it off, not wanting to be disturbed on his birthday. “Ten missed calls, and
all from Sam. What a nightmare this night was turning out to be.”

He turned to Max once again. “Okay you fix everything up, but I have a day off tomorrow and there's things I have to do, so please just give me some space!”

“That's fine Luke...look I'm sorry about your mum, if I were you, I wouldn't say anything to her about your dad, not if she's ill, just say
your exams have been brought forward...okay?”

“Yeah...sure Max. Now if you don't mind, I'd like to get some sleep, of
what's left of the night.

Max left Luke in peace...but Luke's head was still spinning from it all.

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Comments

jolono | April 30, 2012 - 19:45

Liked this a lot Jenny. lots going on, nice easy read. So they're all off on an adventure. Great stuff.

skinner_jennifer | May 1, 2012 - 12:35

Thanks again jolono, really kind of you to say.

Jenny.

Silver Spun Sand | May 1, 2012 - 13:08

Hey Jenny...I really must apologise. I have got kind of behind with these, but shall completely remedy that by the end of the afternoon, I promise.

The tension is really building now...what with his mother and now his father. As I have said before, Jenny, you really are good at keeping your readers on the edge of their seats.

Very much enjoyed;-)

Tina

skinner_jennifer | May 1, 2012 - 14:13

Hi Tina,

please don't appologise. I know how hard it is to
keep up with everyones work. I think we'd have to
sit in front of the computer all day, to be able
to read everyones writing.

But I do so appreciate you reading my story
and letting me know.

You know I always look up to you as a writer,
you just seem to be on my wavelength.

Thanks again,

Jenny.

Denzella | May 2, 2012 - 21:29

Hello Jenny,

You can't shake me off either. I am really enjoying this and I love the way you wrack up the tension.

There is one small thing, Jenny, in the first line of the fourth paragraph I think you have a tautology in that you only need 'first' or 'initial' not both. The only reason I noticed it is that it is something I do quite often.

However it is such a small thing that it in no way detracts from a most enjoyable read.

Well done to you once again!

Moya

skinner_jennifer | May 2, 2012 - 22:35

Hi Moya,

really pleased you're still enjoying and do you
know? you are so right about the wording, so as
soon as I've replied to your wonderful comment,
I will put it right.

By the way, please again let me know if you are
finding the parts and chapters hard to follow,
I can easily adjust accordingly.

Hope you have a good nights sleep.

Thankyou again.

Jenny.

Sooz006 | May 10, 2012 - 22:44

I like that he's going to be going out to help his own father on his first mission.

Another good part. And again vivid in imagination.

skinner_jennifer | May 11, 2012 - 10:17

Thanks again Sooz,

you are really a star reading all these parts.
I so look forward to reading your comments, they
are a story in their own right.

Thankyou again.

Jenny.