Salty sun beams dance
on salty seas, reminds
me when I danced with thee.
The sun dazzles me with its
beauty, touching me caressingly.
When those salty sun beams
disappear, all that's left I
fear, is a cold, dark mass,
When once we danced alas, to the
sound of the breeze, across
those salty seas.
Then when day time disappears,
night time comes, the moon is
clear. She shines down on those
salty seas, then those memories
come flooding back to me.
Once again I see the dance,
I sway with it, go into a trance.
Like diamonds glistening in and
out, those moon beams sparkle all
about. There I stand, I close my
eyes, listen to those gentle tides.
Comments
Kahdai | July 27, 2010 - 18:24
Ah wow I really like this! I love the sea & write about it and the sun and moon too! The last four lines my favourite I could almost be there myself!
darkenwolf | July 28, 2010 - 09:40
a far better poet than i
skinner_jennifer | July 28, 2010 - 11:16
Thanks Kahdai,
For your comments, I was so glad
that you enjoyed the poem.
Jenny.
skinner_jennifer | July 28, 2010 - 11:18
Hi darkenwolf,
Thanks for reading my poem.
I bet you could be better than
me. Your stories are good.
Jenny.
darkenwolf | July 28, 2010 - 12:30
thanks but i am more of a story teller than a poet but i'll keep trying
skinner_jennifer | July 28, 2010 - 14:12
Hi darkenwolf
I just start putting anything down, my mind starts
to wander, words just seem to come out.
Jenny.
darkenwolf | July 28, 2010 - 15:03
thats pretty much how it works with me too
Sally H | July 28, 2010 - 16:30
this is really good kind of makes me wish i was at the seaside, good thing i only have to wait a few days.
Sally H
skinner_jennifer | July 29, 2010 - 17:49
Hi Sally,
Thanks for your comment. I hope you have a
great time at the seaside, hope the sun
shines for you and it stays warm.
Jenny.