Seasons Change

A beautiful opening Jenny and a lovely seasonal poem - well done. :-)

This is lovely, Jenny. So very colourful.

My favourite stanza is the second, but they are all beautiful.

Much enjoyed;-)

Tina

Hello FB,

great to hear from you and I'm really pleased you
liked this poem.

Thankyou for leaving a comment, it's always
appreciated.

Jenny.

Hi there Tina,

I'm so pleased you enjoyed reading this poem, it
kind of came to me this morning while I was having
breakfast, just day dreaming.

Thankyou for reading and letting me know.

Hope you're having a Sunny day.

Jenny.

Stunning, the line: "mesmerized as in a dream" applies to the entire piece. It reads with ease yet mesmerises the reader with wonderful imagery.

Hi maggy,

that's so kind of you to say, I take it as a real
compliment coming from a writer, such as yourself.

Thankyou for letting me know and also for taking
the time to read.

Jenny.

this is beautiful Jenny - well done!

Wow! thankyou insert, what an unexpected surprise,
I'm truely grateful for your wonderful comment and
those beautiful cherries.

Thankyou again Cherrie Pickers, this has made my day.

Jenny.

Well done on the cherry JSkin.
Nice and appropriate for the seasons

Hi ScoZen,

I'm so glad I had that inspiration this morning.
I'm over the moon with the cherries.

Your comment is really appreciated and thankyou
so much for reading.

Jenny.

Hi Jennifer, many congrats on those little dangly red things. Well deserved. You're much more a poet than I/me. Hope the seasons continue to inspire you as much as today.

Loved this one Jenny and congrats with the cherry.
It was so atmospheric and such a beautiful description of Autumn and especially winter. You made it sound all so romantic I almost looked forward to the snow! ha ah but you know me- oh so sad summer is passing but I am looking forward to Spring.

;)Pia

And you just get better and better, Jenny. Such lovely feelgood atmosphere in this poem. I just wanted to wrap myself up in it.

sue

Really lovely. I cannot write descriptive poetry to save my life but Autumn is lovely & sort of pensive. You have captured this brilliantly. Very well deserved cherry.

Hi there oldpesky,

it's more than great to know that you read this
poem and enjoyed. I can only say that you give
me a smile whenever I read your comments, please
don't ever change.

Thankyou for reading and the comment.

Jenny.

Hi Pia,

I like the idea that you thought this sounded
romantic, it was kind of where I was going with
this one...well that and also magical, which as
you know, is how I see this time of the year.

Hope you are still getting that Sun that you
love.

Thankyou for reading and leaving such a nice
comment, always appreciated.

Jenny.

Hello sue,

what a lovely comment you left me, I love the idea
of being wrapped in the magic of a poem.

I just saw this magical lake and went with the idea,
kind of something ethereal came to mind.

I must get around to reading your pieces, I will I
promise.

Hope you are well and having a good week.

Thanks for reading and your amazing comment.

Jenny.

Hi there Overthetop1,

I don't believe for one moment you can't write good
descriptive poetry, I think if you were really to sit
down and think about it, it would come to you
eventually.

It was really kind of you to read this piece and to
let me know that you enjoyed it, I always appreciate
comments so much, they are one of the reason that I'm
encouraged to write, so thankyou again.

Jenny.

A lovely wrap for the season. Congrats!

Hello msiagirl,

thankyou so much for reading this poem and for
letting me know you enjoyed it, always appreciated.

Jenny.

beautiful

Hi coral,

how are you? haven't heard from you in a while.

I'm really glad you liked this one and that word
beautiful made my day.

Thankyou for reading and commenting.

Jenny.

new skinner_jennifer
Well deserved cherries!
All has been said, waited to9
see this posted. It is a great
poem, of picturesque beauty of nature,
words, excelling, like whimsical, dappled
leaves and ambience. I felt as if I was there!
With the Author showing me the lake.
I did one poem once called "Russett Leaves".
Pleased as it only back garden and fall of them etc;
gorgeopus formation colour. just typed it on, think got cherry! sometimes if not studied poem do,or in a mood something gpne wrong! bingo cherry! Without altering context of the poem odd how it works out.
Have good day.
julie xx

Hi julie,

just went over to your poem "Russett Leaves," and
read it. What an honestly brilliant piece of writing,
you really excelled yourself on that one and really
deserved the cherries.

Thankyou for your kind comment on mine, I do so
appreciate it and glad you could see the magic in it.

Jenny. xx

new Skinner_jennifer
Hi! So kind, gobsmacked get
one,as it was only looking at garden.
Making more observant and noticing so
much now can do. Colou'rs and beauty of
poems. Gee! thankyou.
I have seen your poetry clim mountains too!
thanks resting got cuppa.After not good news,
tuesday night, kind of expected not in the way was
Given pass on to me shock. Good day to-gtehr Chichester Cathedral, and art gallery. etc; shop and a lunch cheered! me up. Somone big issue I buy know,seen his great work, now been recognised, in art gallery Chicheter Pallant House great day.Bit expensive get in Tuesdasy cheaper day, but over 2o rooms plus D.J. Under all adversity he had,turning his life around, so pleased for him. Ray came and we took photos in cafe garden of Cathedral not been years, and inside bigger than remember,built on cafe
restaurant. Shop expensive. You have such great way of expanding mind,now in colours and story in poems,
like them all.
one of photos me holding the AbcTales, pathway of flower's then I snapped one of him.
beauty lovely.
take care!
julie xx

Hi Jen :) I hope your not to bad :)

Like always simply brilliant poetry and written well.

I will confess this is lost on my pallet as you can tell the way I write lol which is more for the folk like myself on the street lol no complicated Shakespeare words I can write lol;

But this is perfect and you will be published soon if not already on the way!!!!!

Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)))

Wow! julie,

it sounds like you had an amazing time at Chichester Cathedral, I've never been there myself, but it sounds like the kind of place I would like to visit, Oh well, maybe someday.

Thankyou again for coming back to me with all your
news.

Jenny. xx

Hello Prettyrose,

I was over the moon with your comment and though I
really do like Shakespeare, It hadn't occurred to me
that this poem would be in his league.

Your comment is more than welcome and I really do
appreciate you reading.

I'm fine by the way, hope you are well too and having
a good week.

You keep writing and smiling too.

Jenny.

'a sweet caress wrapped in Winter's ambience' - absolutely stunning, Jenny. Sorry I got here a little late, this is a beautiful poem and sure deserves the cherries and praise alike - very, very much enjoyed :)

Rachel xx

Hi there Rachel,

thanks for reading my poem and for the great
comment, I'm glad you like it.

Have a great weekend and keep on truckin with the
writing.

Jenny.xx

You too, Jenny :)

Rachel xx

Beautiful, Jenny. I do love this time of year and you've cpatured autumn's essence perfectly. Well done!

Magic xxx

Hi Magic,

I totally agree with you, this is my favourite time
of the year, for me it holds a kind of Magic...ha!ha,
like your name.

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this poem and thankyou so
much for letting me know.

Have a great weekend.

Jenny.xxx