Slave to Love

"for a deliriously
intoxicated mortal such as I am."

- yep, we've all been there, Jenny! This is raw and beautiful - especially love that final stanza.

Magic xxx

'the four winds blow the flames of our passion'

was my favourite line, I think.

I liked the structure of the poem, the way it was broken up. I could really hear the emmotion in the voice of the speaker.

I wallow in this sort of stuff. The last stanza - think you meant to type "our"?

I think this is a corker Jenny - definitely one of your best. :-)

Hi there Magic,

thankyou for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed
this poem.

Thankyou for letting me know.

Jenny xxx

Hello JoHn,

it's always nice to get a comment from you, to know
that you've taken a line and enjoyed, makes me so
happy.

Thankyou for reading and taking the time to let me
know.

Jenny.

Hi Blessing, I too love to wallow in this kind of
poetry, it's certainly writing that I will be enjoying in 2012.

Thankyou for reading and your kind comment.

Jenny.

Hi FB,

writing poetry, is something that I love and when
someone else gets as much pleasure from it, as I
do writing, then it makes my day.

Thankyou so much for letting me know, always
appreciated.

Jenny.

Hello skinner-jennifer,
Jenny,

I could "not let the sands of time run out..." before telling you how much I enjoyed your poem.

I try to read as much poetry as I can in the vain hope that one day I will unravel it's mysteries!

But tell me "love sealed but not 'excepted'"...I feel I want to read it as accepted. Forgive me if I have just ruined your poetic thought by being too pragmatic. Perhaps now you can see what I mean about me not having a poetic soul.

But you do have...

Moya

Hi Moya,

thankyou so much for your help and you were so
right about that word, I always seem to know what
I need to get down in a poem, but slip up on the
spelling. I have now put the word right.

You certainly haven't ruined anything for me in
this poem, I'm so glad you enjoyed, and took something from it, thankyou for letting me know and for the help.

Jenny.

Brilliant Jenn- a very eloquent piece of writing.. every word has a poignant meaning and is delivered very well. Congrats-

;)Pia

Thanks so much for reading this Pia,
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it and I appreciate your
comment and your congrats.

Hope you are well.

Jenny.

What a great surprise to find cherries, thankyou so
much cherry pickers, much appreciated.

Jenny.

I missed this one, till just now, Jenny. No surprise it won its cherries. This is absolutely brilliant;-)

Tina

Love it! Especially love the last stanza; spit and polish finish is always gratifying. Well done.

Chris ;)

Good morning Tina,

there is so much to read on here, that it would be
almost impossible to read everything, but I'm so
glad that you enjoyed reading this one and I do
appreciate you telling me. Thankyou.

Jenny.

Why thankyou Chris, for your kind words. Loved your
thoughts on this poem and thankyou again.

Always appreciated.

Jenny.

What a wonderful poem, Jenny. I'm left breathless.

Coral xx

Goodmorning coral,

what a wonderful comment, I too am left breathless
by your words.

It's so nice when someone takes away a feeling from
reading. Emotions are such a precious gift. Thankyou
for taking a look and letting me know you enjoyed.

Jenny.xx

Hi Jenny :) Hope your not to bad :) well done I agree its your best, but I think your work is brilliant anyway.

At one point, 'The wind blows your name...
alone to resist is not feasible,
your virtuosity entrancing me,'

Really made me go to a special moment with an ex :)))) so thanks for that!!!!! joking aside it was like I was there, loved it and wish I had half as much of your talent!!!!!!

Keep Writing
Keep Smiling :)

Good afternoon prettyrose,

you have made my Sunday with your kind words, I'm
so pleased you enjoyed and took something of the
poem with you.

I truely believe that each one of us on abc tales
has a special talant and it's great that we can
share with others, the things we have learnt.

Thankyou for reading and letting me know your
thoughts.

Hope you are well and enjoying the weekend.

Jenny.

Good morning, this poem is poignant and frisky enough to seek new avenues in the friendship of life. Richard LP

Good afternoon Richard,

thankyou so much for reading this
poem and I'm glad you enjoyed.

Your comment's appreciated.

Jenny.