The Dark

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Lying on my bed
In the dark
I have no fear
For I welcome
The dark
The black velvet
Envelopes me
Cocoons me
Soothes me
No ghosts, demons
Nor banshees’
In the still of the night
Permeate my darkness
For I’m not religious
I came from the dark
And I will leave
In the dark.

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Comments

maggyvaneijk | August 8, 2011 - 21:44

I wish I read this when I was younger and afraid of the dark that you have managed to portray as soothing and safe in this beautiful poem. The ending is particular is stunning.

Stevehawk | August 8, 2011 - 22:19

Whew, at last a comment, I was thinking I must be doing something wrong here. I too was afraid of the dark when younger, but then it is as natural as light, and has it's own beauty. Thanks again for your comment.

shoe | August 9, 2011 - 16:31

The dark is much maligned, I blame Christians! I have been thinking of writing a poem about the dark for the last few days, and here you have gone and beaten me to it! lovely poem, :}

Stevehawk | August 9, 2011 - 18:50

Thks Shoe, such kind words from a poet whose writing I'm in awe of, don't blame the Christians, blame Thomas Edison....

Stevehawk | September 12, 2012 - 16:53

"The Dark" has won the Koestler Gold Award!!!!!

shoe | September 17, 2012 - 10:31

I know a good thing when I see one!!!