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SEX IS

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Published by sue dinum on November 29, 2011 - 19:18
from the ABC set Erotica

SEX IS
a pool of sweat and honey
a peppy drink to lap up
matted hair and fingers
and her loving cup

a ballet of sorts
with skin and liquid lust
it is like hot champagne
in our pink embrace

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Highhat | November 29, 2011 - 19:46

I wouldn't like to drink hot champagne!

sue dinum | November 29, 2011 - 20:27

I couldn't agree more!

scratch | November 30, 2011 - 16:08

Two simple and beautifully constructed stanzas Sue. Well done.

sue dinum | November 30, 2011 - 21:11

Thanks very much, scratch. I'm getting round to your other piece, just trying to catch up with everybody at the moment. Many thanks for your support.

sue

well-wisher | May 4, 2012 - 20:21

Wonderful. This is great erotic poetry, in my opinion anyway.

sue dinum | May 4, 2012 - 20:29

Thanks very much, John, your opinion is easily good enough for me.

Best wishes

Trev