a pool of sweat and honey
a peppy drink to lap up
matted hair and fingers
and her loving cup
a ballet of sorts
with skin and liquid lust
it is like hot champagne
in our pink embrace
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Highhat | November 29, 2011 - 19:46
I wouldn't like to drink hot champagne!
sue dinum | November 29, 2011 - 20:27
I couldn't agree more!
scratch | November 30, 2011 - 16:08
Two simple and beautifully constructed stanzas Sue. Well done.
sue dinum | November 30, 2011 - 21:11
Thanks very much, scratch. I'm getting round to your other piece, just trying to catch up with everybody at the moment. Many thanks for your support.
well-wisher | May 4, 2012 - 20:21
Wonderful. This is great erotic poetry, in my opinion anyway.
sue dinum | May 4, 2012 - 20:29
Thanks very much, John, your opinion is easily good enough for me.
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