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from the ABC set Life is Bittersweet

Once, I was blossom, daughter of Spring- petals like feathers, soft and fledgling and the sunshine nourished me, the sunshine smiled down at me.
An Autumn breeze touched me, somewhere in the midst of Summer, but I shook it off

I shook it off.

I woke to morning dew, and the sounds of birds above me. I listened as they spoke- wise words that I almost understood.

I lingered long in youthful dreams; the sky exquisite, the moon enchanted.

And then from nowhere- prematurely- Winter stalked up on me... such cold fingers, wrapping around the branches, wrapping around my consciousness.
I saw, quite clearly, how fragile I was. I trembled and shivered

trembled and shivered.

A new day and Winter faded- drifted into shadows. The air felt cooler, I felt changed. My reality was no longer mine, but blighted with the chill that had attached itself to me.

This was long ago. Only now do I see the consequences. One by one, my petals fall- they float to the ground like absurd snowflakes- and no, the irony is not lost on me.

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Comments

Highhat | September 17, 2011 - 17:27

I liked this- one big metaphor- well done Sundays very nice

;)Pia

Silver Spun Sand | September 17, 2011 - 19:27

Beautiful, Sunday's.

Tina;-)

SundaysChild | September 17, 2011 - 22:01

Thanks very much guys- and thanks also for the cherry :) Will try to catch up with abctales soon, I'm just under a lot of pressure at the moment. xx

MistakenMagic | September 20, 2011 - 18:25

"One by one, my petals fall- they float to the ground like absurd snowflakes- and no, the irony is not lost on me." - love the ending, Sunday. There's something really profound here. A beautiful bit of prosetry!

Magic xxx

seashore | September 22, 2011 - 23:16

Lovely

SundaysChild | September 29, 2011 - 16:50

Thanks very much Magic and Seashore xx