Once, I was blossom, daughter of Spring- petals like feathers, soft and fledgling and the sunshine nourished me, the sunshine smiled down at me.
An Autumn breeze touched me, somewhere in the midst of Summer, but I shook it off
I shook it off.
I woke to morning dew, and the sounds of birds above me. I listened as they spoke- wise words that I almost understood.
I lingered long in youthful dreams; the sky exquisite, the moon enchanted.
And then from nowhere- prematurely- Winter stalked up on me... such cold fingers, wrapping around the branches, wrapping around my consciousness.
I saw, quite clearly, how fragile I was. I trembled and shivered
trembled and shivered.
A new day and Winter faded- drifted into shadows. The air felt cooler, I felt changed. My reality was no longer mine, but blighted with the chill that had attached itself to me.
This was long ago. Only now do I see the consequences. One by one, my petals fall- they float to the ground like absurd snowflakes- and no, the irony is not lost on me.
Comments
Highhat | September 17, 2011 - 17:27
I liked this- one big metaphor- well done Sundays very nice
;)Pia
Silver Spun Sand | September 17, 2011 - 19:27
Beautiful, Sunday's.
Tina;-)
SundaysChild | September 17, 2011 - 22:01
Thanks very much guys- and thanks also for the cherry :) Will try to catch up with abctales soon, I'm just under a lot of pressure at the moment. xx
MistakenMagic | September 20, 2011 - 18:25
"One by one, my petals fall- they float to the ground like absurd snowflakes- and no, the irony is not lost on me." - love the ending, Sunday. There's something really profound here. A beautiful bit of prosetry!
Magic xxx
seashore | September 22, 2011 - 23:16
Lovely
SundaysChild | September 29, 2011 - 16:50
Thanks very much Magic and Seashore xx